The Edge

Well you can be the judge of this silly rhyme:

You pulled my hair , we were both bare you locked me with a stare and whispered “You think you're going to get relief? Don't you dare.” 

You made my lip quiver with anticipation you said seductively “Don't shiver sweetheart you'll enjoy this stimulation”. 

You carried on with your devilish task making each moment climb higher “Oh please?!” I couldn't even ask or plead. 

Then I felt myself jolt as I got close then you pulled your hand away with a smile and said “No.” 

I hope you enjoyed it I've not written a poem or whatever you would call this since 2014.
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November 9, 2025 at 9:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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