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The Edge

~ She skipped along the edge of the lake, her refection dancing upon it's clear smooth surface, light brown hair flowing in the cool November breeze... singing a melodic autumn song while happily tossing flower petals into the water... and as I watch from the thicket at the edge of the woods, I am mesmerized by her charm when it occurs to me... I have never seen the lake look more beautiful

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Date: 10/6/2021 10:37:00 AM
Lovely it made me wonder more of the things we take for granted.
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Date: 1/9/2021 10:49:00 AM
Sigh...How beautiful this is..as beautiful as your written lake.
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Date: 12/4/2020 1:59:00 AM
Lovely write, Chris. God bless you always
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Date: 12/3/2020 7:17:00 PM
Love the last line! Hello Chris!
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Date: 12/3/2020 12:46:00 PM
WoW! Chris, I'm glad you're posting again. You have created such a lovely scene. The imagery within your well-written write is just breathtaking. I found it to be romantic as well. I hope you are well and staying my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/3/2020 11:14:00 AM
Wow love this Chris...I'm so glad you're back posting, you were truly missed! Now I need you to do one for my contest I know it will be brilliant!! Yeah Chris' back!!
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