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The Earth Trembled

The earth trembled that day, 
The clattering sounds fused
With crying sounds
Could be heard from miles away,

The fear etched on the faces of many
The screams of pain resounding 
While they scramble to safety
Tramping each other in the process

It is impossible to escape
Without being traumatized 
Left with visible and invisible scars

Those lucky enough to be alive
Relay tales of horror
With loved ones missing
And many still ensnared beneath buildings and debris…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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K. Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 10:11 PM
haha our sleep pattern's are whacked! hmmm maybe you can get me a seat at Table Mountain?? or you can catch me one of those whales?? thanks!! -- nikko ;)
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July 18, 2010 at 2:52 PM
Although many are lost in these eruptions of our surface, you have to marvel at her power. Nature excites me to no end, and we will never tame her, only live beside her. Another wonderful poem Wilma >> James
K. Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 12:58 PM
This sure is a moving poem about an earthquake (pun not intended though...) very good write on how you captured the trauma & fear brought about by such a calamity-- keep on writing!! -- nikko :)
Brown Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:03 AM
It's been a pleasure to read your poetry today Wilma. Love, Carol
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July 17, 2010 at 3:28 AM
Powerful write with many strong feelings.. always Michael
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July 16, 2010 at 8:47 AM
VERY good, WIlma, this description here. please call it something else, not light poetry, dear. For me "light" implies not serous. This is deeper than that! If you can relate to my Mind lock poem, I hope you will read my blog, Wilma! And how nice to find someone who can relate to my Pre thing. hahaha. (Methinks very few on Soup are in that category) Luv, Andrea
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