The Dues I Pay

The Dues I Pay There are so many hues in the colour gray. That colour fills – are dues I must pay for how I have lived – my used up day upon this plane – a misty cover to stay mist filled eyes projecting a desire to say, “ I am sorry ” to all, for ? and want to pray that all I have done wrong will not fray the edges of this scene, in which I play - for three score and ten – my part - my way guided by the Stars ?, Mars ?, Musical bars. By those who influenced ?, my business in cars ? Now all my days - in grays – direct me – lost to all that once had meaning, feeling – at what cost ? A soulless spirit that roams the passages of time, frost on his shoulders, ice in his veins. That is all, of this soul, that remains B. J. “A ” 2 February 13th 2006

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Kp Nunez

Date: 3/1/2015 11:31:00 AM

Wow. Dark melancholia overload. But, a soulless spirit? I'd like to think you've only exercised a bit of poetic license here, sire. More 7 hugs and smiles from the isles, :D Kim

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 3/3/2015 8:49:00 PM

“ The Dues I Pay ”. “ Wow. Dark melancholia overload. ”. They were the days my Dear, and that was the time Kim. Those where the words to enlighten, the catalysis to set free. I think the writes say it all, but the words that express what was felt are just that – words – and so am I really “ a soulless spirit? ” ??? Judge for yourself. “ ? I'd like to think you've only exercised a bit of poetic license here, sire.” and you just might very well be right Kim, but know this ( there is always - without exception –a grain or two of truth in everything said or written ) my Dear. Once again Kim, thank you for the “ More 7 hugs and smiles from the isles, :D Kim ” B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )