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The Drifter

I feel eternity slipping away from me as I drift across the universe...

Feb.24.2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/13/2016 6:44:00 PM

very different approach. I like what you came up with!!

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/13/2016 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...I like to experiment with different methods...I'm glad you liked it...and I have many more up my sleeve...just got to make sure no doves come out lol...god bless...^WW^

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/13/2016 11:35:00 AM

Hi WW, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I do like this different approach all together. Keep drifting and letting your words sing....Vlad.

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/13/2016 6:49:00 PM

Thank you my friend...its always good to try something new...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus

Date: 3/13/2016 5:46:00 AM

This monoku is a different take when compared to the other entries; maybe I'm biased towards the picture, but I like it! Congratulations on your fine win! // paul

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/13/2016 7:46:00 AM

Thank you Paul...I guess we are all drifters in some way or another...god bless...^WW^

Paul Callus
Date: 3/13/2016 5:47:00 AM

.....and very fitting for a drifter:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/12/2016 8:47:00 PM

Winged Warrior, Congratulations on your awesome Monoku Win. Stop by my latest blog "Spellbound -I'm so late-" if you'd like. Sorry, it took me this long to close this contest. I hope it does not discourage you to enter any of my future contest. I do apologize. Love LINDA

Winged Warrior
Date: 3/13/2016 7:40:00 AM

Thank you my dear Linda...nice to see or should I say read read from you again...welcome back...^WW^