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The Dressing Room

I gather up a bunch of tops And go to try them on. The thought occurs that someday Dressing rooms might all be gone. As people order more and more Online, it’s pretty clear That stores with all their racks of clothes Will one day disappear. So dressing rooms will vanish, too, Their mirrors and their hooks, Some privacy provided To check out how something looks. I like that time alone in them, Just me and my reflection, Assessing every angle For acceptance or rejection. Then once I have decided I hand back what doesn’t suit And pay for what I want and head home, Carrying my loot. Of course, my home has mirrors So that I can preen and strut But I’ll miss the room where I discover Just what makes the cut.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/18/2018 6:16:00 PM
You are the chronicler of 'Vanishing America.' … But it will live on in the words of your fine poem!! I really, really like this one. A period piece which will outlast the period. Bravo. ~ gw
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Date: 6/13/2018 4:04:00 AM
- I hate dressing room ... always a sharp and unfriendly light ... little space ... and a lot of stress ... I buy in the store and try at home - My city is not that big ... there are always people who know you ... no problem with switching :) - Lovely poem, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/13/2018 1:02:00 AM
Have bought stuff online and you've guessed, had to send it back, I'm not as slim as I thought.lol.
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Date: 6/12/2018 9:57:00 PM
I’m with Jan! Have to try clothes on!
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Date: 6/12/2018 6:55:00 PM
Ilene, I doubt anything looks bad when you preen and strut :). Enjoyed your fun write and accurate prediction!
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Date: 6/12/2018 6:44:00 PM
oh perish the thought of them getting rid of changing rooms I HAVE to try something on and would hate to buy on line only to find it didn't fit or didn't look nice! Fabulous poem as ever Ilene I love your witty style of rhyme:-) hugs jan xx
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