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The Dress Was White

The dress was white with flowered trim. It flared widely from the hip. I turned just as the camera clicked. We were standing on the stern of the ship. Auburn hair in bright sunlight, a white sundress that flared. Captured in the camera's eye just that one moment shared. I hate to have my picture taken and will do my best to hide but with ocean as the backdrop I show that picture with pride. So many years have gone since then. My youth has gone as well. It was a magical day on that ship as the picture will surely tell. ~~Francine Roberts~~ for Constance's 'The Sundress' contest p.s. the picture is on my blog

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Date: 4/18/2011 8:53:00 PM
Great job on this. Thank you so much for your kind review. It means a lot to me:) R.M.
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Date: 4/14/2011 7:06:00 AM
I myself, being of the old school tradition, find that women are more beautiful while wearing dresses, especially sundresses. Its a pity that today's fashions are trending away from the simple beauties of the past. But then, I do find recompense in that the older I get the more I see the inner beauty that was hidden from the youth of my heart. You have written a nice poem Francine, I hope it does well.
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Date: 4/9/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Francine in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:09:00 AM
I knew I would see this delightful poem in the winners circle, Francine. Many congrats. Elaine
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Date: 4/4/2011 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's Contest with this very lovely poem, Francine! Always, Annalise
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Date: 4/4/2011 10:43:00 AM
Congrats on all your wins, Francine : ) Jack
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:25:00 AM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Francine! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:25:00 AM
So happy to see your poem in the winners' circle, Francine! Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:15:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your big win with this beautiful write---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:32:00 PM
francine, you looked vavavoom in that sundress pic of yours.. here 's a TOAST to the high win..: huggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:21:00 PM
Nice we have these pictures to show how we looked in our youth. Lovely poem and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:48:00 PM
loved it the first time and more so the second time round. Big Congratulations.
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:11:00 PM
Super congrats to you Francine! How wonderful that Constance's contest made you remember all about this beautiful photo of yourself in a sundress & of that magical day-- I will go check it out :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:08:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Constance, Francine
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:47:00 PM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful win in the sundress contest with this awesome write which I simply adore ..it is so unique.. honored to be sharing winners list with u my friend.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:06:00 PM
Wonderful job Francine, congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:10:00 PM
What a clever story for this contest, Francine....but I love the picture you posted recently! We all have fond memories of those pretty dresses we once wore! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/2/2011 8:42:00 AM
Wonderful take on the picture you posted Francine. It's a lovely piece. Good luck in the contest....:)
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Date: 3/25/2011 10:59:00 AM
thanks for making my piece part of your " swoon me" list, francise... !
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Date: 3/24/2011 8:17:00 PM
Lovely words tocompliment your lovely photo on your blog Francine.. wonderfully told story .. good luck in the contest.. an awesome entry my friend.. good luck... and your new contest is super luv..
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:33:00 PM
lovely memory I bet you looked great! Thanks for valuing my write for your contest, it's not an easy form! Light & Love
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:24:00 PM
Thank you for the 5th place honor in your contest. Francine. Lainie. This is my second reading of this poem. A winner for sure.
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Date: 3/24/2011 11:20:00 AM
Thanks, Francine : ) It was great fun, Jack
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Date: 3/24/2011 10:40:00 AM
...oops just popping in here to say......thank you for your sweet comment on SHE IS MY SUN.....actually I enjoyed writing it more than many a recent poem....thanks for the opportunity in the contest...sincerely...Syd
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