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The Dreamcatcher

a crystal bead hanging on silken thread Raindrop on a dreamcatcher Grandmother Spider’s web glistening wires coated in diamond dust spilling down from azure sky elderly weaver spins diamond by diamond and dots to more dots pictures drawn by the teacher lovely constellations heavenly bodies do-see-do around a black canvas in motion kinetic work of art 1-1-2022 A STRAND (1044) Poetry Contest Brian Strand

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George Yiorgos Stathakis

Date: 1/7/2022 12:21:00 PM

Beautifully described. Awesome!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:17:00 PM

Thank you George.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/2/2022 7:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun story/write. Dreamcatchers can be fun to make. Have a blessed day..................

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/11/2022 2:18:00 PM

Thank you.

Gary Radice

Date: 1/2/2022 4:21:00 AM

Great poetry M. L. and i have learnt something new - I'd never heard of the kimo form of poetry until today and have found out that it is an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. ... 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest and for helping to enlighten me. :) Cheers - Gary

M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/3/2022 11:21:00 AM

Thanks so much Gary.