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Dream Peeper

I stand here in someone's dream, a pleasant way to spend the night. All my dreams have boring themes, for them to share seems only right. Would it be considered wrong, to jump aboard their train? Just one night to tag along, to take a ride in someone's brain. Looking out of windows strange, at a different point of view. Could this help to rearrange, help to make a vision new? If they wake and find me there, in the middle of their mind. Their dream now a nightmare, a horrible thing to wake and find. I've decided to stay at home, not covet the dreams of others. Only dreaming dreams I own, while I lay beneath my covers. 10/9/18

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Date: 2/5/2019 9:07:00 AM
I like this! Cute and clever--dreams are like little lives we are born into nightly-- congrats on your win, Wren (sorry for the alliteration!)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/5/2019 6:09:00 PM
Thank you L.J. Have a blessed day my friend!
Date: 2/2/2019 4:11:00 PM
Back with congrats! This may be one of my very favorite poems ever!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/3/2019 7:58:00 PM
Thank you P.S.!
Date: 2/2/2019 12:35:00 PM
This had me laughing and smiling, and laughing out loud. I think you were right to stay at home. No telling what kind of trouble that would entail. However, I think the concept is really cool. Thank you for putting a big smile on my face.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 2/2/2019 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Sherilynn. Have a wonderful weekend my friend!
Date: 10/11/2018 7:33:00 AM
Great decision! Best of luck with the contest.
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Date: 10/9/2018 8:09:00 AM
creepy cool concept and excellent execution. kudos! another fav !
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/25/2018 1:49:00 AM
I just love this one! I wish I could "fav" it again!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/9/2018 8:54:00 AM
Thanks P.S.
Date: 10/9/2018 7:27:00 AM
This makes so much sense to me, as I have close relatives who have shared the same dream more than once. Good luck in the contest!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 10/9/2018 7:52:00 AM
Thank you Caren, Have wonderful day.

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