The Downer

Behind the door he, in death, lay- - -

Hey, who has seen my Brad today?
Come on man, you and I are tight.
It’s just, well, I like him in sight.


His glassy eyes, no warmth bestowed- - -

He and Jones hauled a double load.
For that same no insurance dude?
Hey, you don’t have to come unglued. 


A face once taut, now sagging down- - -

Get that phone will you Tot, I’m wound.
It’s for you Gin, sounds like the feds.
Dang Tot, you need to get off meds.


I’m sorry he has been through a lot- - -

Oh my God why has Brad been shot?
The gangs Ginnie, sell protection.
They practice raids to perfection. 


He heard her sob from far away- - -

Perhaps it all renews some day.
She knew this kind of love can’t die.
It just wears thin the more you cry.

©  May 2011 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
May 16, 2011 at 3:31 PM
What an exciting Bonnie & Clyde ride![PS CONGRAD'S ON YOU'RE #1 WIN IN THE COLLABERATION CONTEST ;)] lIGHT & Love
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May 14, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Please see my blog about this new form. Especially if you like it. Not necessarily if you like my poem, but the form. Maybe you would like to try one for me. Is not a contest. Just a challenge.
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