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The Double Edged Sword

it must be great they say I wish I could do this But if only they knew With one comes the other it must be great they say When you can see But if only they knew The sights that have been seen Would they want them it must be great they say When you can hear But the things that have been heard And cannot be told It must be great they say When you can feel Feel the pain and all the hurt Of those that have passed in sorrow It must be great they say If only they knew The double edged sword With blades so sharp

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Date: 6/10/2025 12:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:35:00 PM
MAGGIE, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
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