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The Don'T Give Up On Me Blues

Introduction *For those who enjoy and are familiar with Blues music only. Otherwise, may make no sense.. Panagiota*            ~~~~ 'The Don't Give Up On Me Blues" Oh, hey! Woke up this mornin' Just trying to write me a poem. Yes, I say it was the wee hours of the mornin, but done nothin' comin' into my empty head! So I crawled me under those warm covers and got me back into my old bed! But feelin' this was in vain, I got me to the kitchen to make some hot coffee. Yes, I say I walked me to that cold kitchen to get strong coffee. But gotta tell ya, the awful truth.baby! Like a dang fool, I spilled the dang coffee all over me. Now the floor it's be lookin' like the River Styx! I am sadly thinking, that maybe me and this poetry Just ain't no good mix. Now, ain't that the truth? Oh, yaaaa! January 13, 2020 2:15pm First Blues Poem

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Date: 1/13/2020 9:45:00 PM
the River Styx! Yes, I am starting to sing the blues now for sure!
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Date: 1/14/2020 1:50:00 PM
Hi, Caren,......LOL...sing it, my friend! Enjoyed your visit! Panagiota xxx
Date: 1/13/2020 7:36:00 PM
You can sing this over at Buddy Guy's Legends
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Date: 1/14/2020 1:48:00 PM
Hi TS~ appreciate your visit and suggestion. Panagiota xx
Date: 1/13/2020 5:58:00 PM
I could hear the moody music in my head Panagiota. Great stuff!
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Date: 1/13/2020 6:17:00 PM
Connie~ oh, glad, glad you Coukd hear the music. Thank you. Panagiota xx
Date: 1/13/2020 5:47:00 PM
G'day Panagiota … I'd like to hear this delivered in blues format. Pleasant tale too Panagiota - Lindsay
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Date: 1/13/2020 6:06:00 PM
I can sing it.~))). So glad you enjoyed. I've loved Blues since High School. Be well.....Panagiota xx
Date: 1/13/2020 5:44:00 PM
Oh yeaaaa! Great blues rhythm to your poem Panagiota. I loved it. Everything you write is so unique and different. Your talent knows no bounds my friend. Really enjoyed this one. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 1/13/2020 6:05:00 PM
Oh, so glad you liked it, Ann! I was afraid to post it. I needed to hear what you said, as my faith in myself as a poet is indeed not there. And that poem really did express my feelings about not being as good as others here. Most appreciativelly. Panagiota xx

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