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The Disowned Face

On a secret journey she has long been walking in the dark alley of her lonely life losing the fragile sanctity to the flood of strife drowns deep within the sucking cesspool of sin. In the desolate depth of the darkest night she searches for the sinking soul in torment finds it sliced in the debris of shame to repent pines to be free from the bonds of despised plight. In surging storm blowing with pent up remorse the strands of her mind swirl like the hair blown hiding with her sordid hands the face she disowns prays to God to show her drifted life’s virtuous course. ____________ August 9, 2020 For Brian Strand's Contest A Brian Strand July 16

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Date: 7/17/2021 1:27:00 PM
Great descriptive writing, Subimal! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 2/16/2021 2:32:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:48:00 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 2/15/2021 9:48:00 AM
A wonderful, thoughtful write Subimal, congratulations on the win ~ Belle
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