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The Difference of Distance - For Adult Contest

The Difference of Distance The difference between adult and a dolt is that one will stay the other bolt. submitted to – The TRUE Meaning of Being Adult sponsor – FJ Thomas

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Carrie Richards

Date: 4/27/2015 8:24:00 PM

Wow....a lot said in a few words.......but isn't that the truth !! Well said, John!

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/25/2015 4:11:00 AM

Brief, succint, complete and concise. Great take and goodluck, JOhn. :) Kim. PS. QUICK,please, before FJ sees this. She will automatically disqualify if the title is without "For Adult Contest"

John Lawless
Date: 4/25/2015 6:24:00 AM

Thanks Kim, made the correction hope it wasn't dropped before that.

Abidemi Oyewole

Date: 4/24/2015 5:12:00 PM

thoughtful....

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/24/2015 4:41:00 PM

Wow, John, a lot said in this one couplet! Perfect! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 4/24/2015 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Sandra, I have always had trouble with being an "adult" or so I have been told by the "adults"

Jan Allison

Date: 4/24/2015 4:05:00 PM

VERY clever John:-) hope this does well for you:-) Hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 4/24/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I still burst into an off-key rendition of the song from Peter Pan....I won't grow up....I have learned that there is a difference between being child-like and childish.