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The Devil In a Bottle

~The Devil in a Bottle~ Waves or fears so thick you could feel them ripple up the stairs… The screams the pleadings the sobs, We would chant our well learnt prayers… We learnt them from over use; we learnt them off by rote, Huddled together at night in bed - underneath the overcoat. That is our blanket on the bed for three. Please God don’t let our dad hurt our pretty mum-my. This nightly prayer was our plea, we nightly did espouse Because we learned the devil- he had now entered our house. Our dad was the nicest man around, but the devil was spirits and beer. He could be so happy until his drink - filled us all with fear. Our mum became religious to fight this devil away But she was never strong enough even though she would pray all day. The happy days came when he went to work at sea. Weeks of peace, we enjoyed we were happy all could see. We forgot about how easily when he was home, the life that we enjoyed. Happiness and fun soon left us as he quickly became annoyed. Then the ripple of tension and fear would creep back in the house Made us wish we could hide in a hole, just like a little mouse Hidden away scurrying through walls, and in between floors Not having to listen to - screams behind closed bedroomdoors.
© ~GG~ 2/08/2012 THIS IS A WORK OF FICTION

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/1/2020 1:20:00 AM
Come across another poem of yours Mandy, in my favourites list....The topic as relevant today as ever....Harry
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Date: 11/29/2012 8:51:00 AM
Dear Mandy, I can feel this POEM I'm Shaking with fear just reading this I often wonder if the children huddling together helped It sometimes did with me I am putting this in my favs LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young) Liege...Harry
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Date: 8/7/2012 4:34:00 AM
I like this alot. I like knowing it was not your true life, because I remember it clearlyand you catured it spot-on. Good work!
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Date: 8/3/2012 6:25:00 PM
Wow, fiction... but my insides churn with fear for this lovely family that the devil in that bottle seeks to destroyed. I felt real life issues speaking here...good write my friend and thanks for stopping by me and for comments made. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/3/2012 12:23:00 PM
A great work of fiction, well done i think. Loved always,bl
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Date: 8/2/2012 3:06:00 PM
Great one that you have penned about the topic of what alcohol can do to a home..Sad that this happens in so many homes around the world..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I hope that you feel better the stitches are gone and healing then soon will be complete...Sara
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Date: 8/2/2012 8:35:00 AM
Mandy I like it, glad it's fiction..David
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Date: 8/2/2012 7:59:00 AM
maybe fiction, Mandy, but this will bring it on home for some, i know been there, This is a classic, to my fav it has to go, because this is life, sadly of a very true life.
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Date: 8/2/2012 4:56:00 AM
i'm so relieved to hear it isn't true - it felt very real and powerful and sad. great poem!
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Date: 8/2/2012 3:21:00 AM
It happens sometime and affect little childrn.Alcohol can be so very messy .Very good and thoughtful write.
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