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The Destruction of Planet Number Three

The sun's savage fingers have penetrated
the calving sheets of ice, delving deeply 
beneath the blankets of the frozen surface.

And the oceans, bruised mauve and swollen 
like a pregnant whore, rail against the rocks
of man's kingdoms with their bowels ripped 
open by bleached coral and rising temperatures;

from which clouds rise up, bitter like a smog 
eclipsed sun, only to fall back to earth with 
corruption pinned to the coat tails of every raindrop. 
And, across the fields, a coal-filled crystalline air 

drives a guilty world's dreams towards unprotected 
lungs and evaporating lands. Where oil worshipped 
totums portray the sordid lucre of promised bounty,
producing lopsided views of a dying humanity

And the keeper of the rain forest's keys deals with a 
polluted man, chain saw in one hand and palm oil in 
the other. Leaving the abandoned trees to rage 
unheard against the indignity of their rape. 

Leaving embattled tribes, gentle guardians of the land, to
stand defenceless against the idolatry of the dollar; whose
spiteful colours of destruction are spreading their kaleidoscopic 
tendrils across a world full of dust bowls and refugee famine

Proud are we who stand tall against a world that gave us
a garden to play in and a sea to banquet on. And proud are 
we who make the toys that blast holes out of creation and 
bind the full power of the sun's wrath against such a tiny emblem

"Knowledge is proud that he has learned so much. Wisdom
is humble that he knows not more" (William Cowper 1785)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/14/2015 5:19:00 AM
Fascinating... I see your point with your comment regarding The Book Store, but you can't compare the geius of one poem vs another, not that I'm suggesting you are. Both this and the 'STORE' rest on their own merits. Here the language is phenomenal and the imagery even more so. A brilliant piece Terry... Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 5:40:00 AM
I think I've hit 'em all at now, so get movin'! I need more of your fine writing. Keith
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Terry Robinson
Date: 12/14/2015 5:34:00 AM
Thank you Keith. This piece is more of a social statement that adds nothing new to the milieu. But, I agree about the imagery. You have become one of my staunchest supporters, for which I am very grateful
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 5:19:00 AM
Whoops! genius

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