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The Desire of a Rippling Stream

A rippling stream in a moonlit night moon in her lap molten delight dancing down a sleeping hill singing a song and making twirl softly breaking the silence-glass telling her presence the dancing lass murmuring leaves of pine,oak nudging each other to start a talk with this damsel lovely stream in this night of moonlit dream falling in love the starry sky flying kisses from up so high a different dream in dancing mind the rippling stream is trying to find the midnight trail of a night bird its distance call could be heard the dancing lass wants to fly with that bird in the sky. =======00=======

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/18/2012 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kash
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:16:00 AM
Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/17/2012 10:45:00 PM
Kash, A wonderful congrats!! :-)~PD
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Date: 4/17/2012 6:54:00 PM
wow, another win with this one, Kash. you won in the contest of that girl who does her judging REALLY late!! Congratulations.
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Date: 4/17/2012 3:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2012 9:49:00 AM
Oh yeah....it COULD BE A SHAPE POEM TOO! A STREAM!!! NICE!! One of your best!
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Date: 4/17/2012 9:47:00 AM
Even STREAMS HAVE NEEDS!! ha ah..Great alliteration and flow...you drew me into to this powerful nature scene so strongly I didn't want to leave! Wonderful magic Kash...Dreamy! Gwendolen :)
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Date: 4/17/2012 5:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Leighann's "Mother Nature" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2011 1:19:00 PM
I see this won in PD's contest but I like it better than number 11 for you! Congrats, Kash.
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Date: 7/20/2011 2:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win! great piece!!!! and Great write ... always Michael
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Date: 7/19/2011 12:04:00 PM
My congrats to you, Kash : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:44:00 AM
Kash, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;)
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Date: 7/19/2011 5:18:00 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2011 8:03:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on another super win in PD's Nature contest luv.. lovely ...
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Date: 6/24/2011 7:34:00 PM
Wonderful! The visuals are all there.
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Date: 6/9/2011 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:46:00 PM
Love it, Kash. Many congrats : )
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Date: 6/6/2011 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your place in this contest. A very unusual write.
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this "stream". Vivid imagery. Nice one, Kathinath. :))
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Date: 6/6/2011 11:15:00 AM
Kash, don't worry. I know my limerick isn't the right length. i discovered that after I went to enter it and realized it was meant for 20 lines, so it's not entered in the contest. It was pretty lame anyway. and i don't have time to do more limericks to add to it. Hey , congratulations with this one! good to see you on this list. LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:20:00 AM
Wonderful write on the challenge Kashinath-- and great formatting too :) enjoyed reading this ans congrats on your win :D
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations Kash, with your win in my contest with this creative poem, I love how it flows like a stream ~
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:02:00 PM
sooo cool, kashi.. smashin' cheers on the win..:) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:50:00 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this superb entry my friend... enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/5/2011 2:34:00 PM
Love the artistic connection of the Starry(Night) Sky and the nudges of the leaves to conversate with the damsel stream... Congrats on this elegant piece, Kash. Gwendolen
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