The Desire of a Rippling Stream

A rippling stream in a moonlit night moon in her lap molten delight dancing down a sleeping hill singing a song and making twirl softly breaking the silence-glass telling her presence the dancing lass murmuring leaves of pine,oak nudging each other to start a talk with this damsel lovely stream in this night of moonlit dream falling in love the starry sky flying kisses from up so high a different dream in dancing mind the rippling stream is trying to find the midnight trail of a night bird its distance call could be heard the dancing lass wants to fly with that bird in the sky. =======00=======
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Kash
Johnson Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 10:45 PM
Kash, A wonderful congrats!! :-)~PD
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 6:54 PM
wow, another win with this one, Kash. you won in the contest of that girl who does her judging REALLY late!! Congratulations.
Kendrick Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
Song Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Oh yeah....it COULD BE A SHAPE POEM TOO! A STREAM!!! NICE!! One of your best!
Song Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 9:47 AM
Even STREAMS HAVE NEEDS!! ha ah..Great alliteration and flow...you drew me into to this powerful nature scene so strongly I didn't want to leave! Wonderful magic Kash...Dreamy! Gwendolen :)
Brown Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 5:10 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Leighann's "Mother Nature" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 1:19 PM
I see this won in PD's contest but I like it better than number 11 for you! Congrats, Kash.
Falotico Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 2:06 PM
Congrats on your win! great piece!!!! and Great write ... always Michael
Horne Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 12:04 PM
My congrats to you, Kash : )
Neels Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Kash, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;)
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on your win in P.D.'s contest "Only (Nature) Allowed". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 8:03 PM
Congrats Kashinath on another super win in PD's Nature contest luv.. lovely ...
Wesley Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 7:34 PM
Wonderful! The visuals are all there.
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Love it, Kash. Many congrats : )
Henderson Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:51 PM
Congratulations on your place in this contest. A very unusual write.
Hendricks Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this "stream". Vivid imagery. Nice one, Kathinath. :))
Dietrich Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 11:15 AM
Kash, don't worry. I know my limerick isn't the right length. i discovered that after I went to enter it and realized it was meant for 20 lines, so it's not entered in the contest. It was pretty lame anyway. and i don't have time to do more limericks to add to it. Hey , congratulations with this one! good to see you on this list. LUv, andrea
K. Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:20 AM
Wonderful write on the challenge Kashinath-- and great formatting too :) enjoyed reading this ans congrats on your win :D
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:30 PM
Congratulations Kash, with your win in my contest with this creative poem, I love how it flows like a stream ~
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:02 PM
sooo cool, kashi.. smashin' cheers on the win..:) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:50 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your exciting win in Constance's contest with this superb entry my friend... enjoy with luv..
Song Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Love the artistic connection of the Starry(Night) Sky and the nudges of the leaves to conversate with the damsel stream... Congrats on this elegant piece, Kash. Gwendolen
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