The Description of Half-Lighted Night

Silently, silently, behind the bed stead of night,
Without any howling of moon,
Besides, walk along the clouds.
Walk silently, melt silently.
At the half- lighted pure hours of darkness.

If sun departs, night would not come,
Evening primroses open forever.
If twilight departs, sun would not come,
Nightmares shine forever.

I wish, the night is admirable,
I wish life ending moments with you,
I am afraid of death without you,
because, I do not know,
What has happened after death? 

Without you, the winds are mischievous,
They come and ask me:
Create situate for me in your heart.
Why do not you come to me like them?

Oh! Listen to me, my life:
Yesterday, I did not sleep at night,
Ask me to come to you.
Place my head in your arms,
And sing a song for me.

Silently, silently, hug me for the last time,
Behind the bed stead of night,
Without any howling of moon,
Besides, walk along the clouds,
Walk silently, melt silently,
At the half- lighted pure hours of darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/17/2010 12:45:00 AM
Nice ...Very nice indeed . This poem has indeed touched my heart and i started realising how important is the presence of other people in my life....Thanks a lot dimpu
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:29:00 AM
thanks to every one once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/10/2010 11:41:00 AM
I have enjoyed this write, very nice. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:09:00 AM
hey friends..plz tell me how can i see my position in contest??? i am unable to find out
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations Shrishty on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:00:00 AM
o my god!!! I win.. yupieeee hurrah!!!!! thanks to all............
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Date: 7/8/2010 1:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, dear Shristy. Wonderful writing. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:49:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! It was so peaceful and endearing. Congrats!
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations, BEautiful writing!
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:28:00 AM
Creative use of imagery to share your thoughts. Congratulations on your second place finish in the Images contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:27:00 AM
Purest of descriptive poetry. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:22:00 AM
Congrats Christy on your big win in the Images contest with this awesome and mesmerizing write .. enjoy ..with luv from the "Sweetheart" on vacation in Hawaii.. AlohA...
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Date: 6/16/2010 7:40:00 AM
thanks!!!!!!!!
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Date: 6/15/2010 5:09:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shrishty. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:38:00 AM
Welcome to Poetryoup, Shrishty! I love this romantic Rhyme. There's a sense of fright and longing. The night is mysterious and yet it inspires and consoles a soul needing love and company. I wish you much success in your future writing endeavors. Thnks for your kind comment. Have a blessed day. Warm Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:05:00 AM
soup mail is on the way
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:05:00 AM
The last few lines conveys your message. Well penned. keep it up.
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Date: 6/12/2010 1:44:00 AM
DO COMMENT AND GIVE YOUR VIEWS
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