The Descent of Man

Knowledge and wisdom are not found
in the chaotic crowd's cacophony of voices
caused by fear and frustration
They gather like swarms of locusts
on emotional wings of hysteria
Their beating sound swallows intellect
creating perpetual hate and anxiety
brought to them by their own failures and frailties
None...which they chose to recognize
or deem worthy of introspection

Crowds easily led by puppetmasters
who have spiraled down to the depths of depravity
as they pull on the strings of discord
tied to patriotic fervor
Exhumed in a kaleidoscope of hollow memories
from history...crowds don't remember
As they turn their anger into a coming apocalypse
where they sell their souls to their masters
as they did once before
When they called out " Give us Barabbas "
Let the Christ die with his last spoken words
" Forgive them... for they know not what they do "


9/25/17
contest 8 word challenge-4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2017 at 1:36 PM
A very deep thought out poem my friend. have a nice day my friend.
Inman Avatar
October 19, 2017 at 8:20 PM
A strong well thought out write Frederic
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 16, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Wow! Searing truth telling, Frederic. So many great lines ... they gather like swarms of locusts on emotional wings of hysteria. Crowds easily led by puppetmasters ... as they pull on strings of discord tied to patriotic fervor. And no, they don't remember, they have Adolf amnesia. Great message poem. Great title as well. Love and peace always.
Brewer Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 3:52 AM
Eloquent, perceptive, insightful and evocative. A remarkable poem, Frederic.
White Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 5:03 AM
Fantastic poem Frederic. You made this sound so easy. Congratulations.
La France Avatar
September 30, 2017 at 1:14 PM
Frederic, CONGRATULATIONS on a super win with this his amazing write !
Daniel Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 11:39 PM
Excellent truths portrayed in a lovely poem, Frederic, congratulations on your first place win:)
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 5:51 PM
Another wonderful sonnet Frederic, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
Krampe Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 5:18 PM
Powerful poem, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
Sands Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations Frederic! :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Another wonderful write Frederick, worthy of a fine first place!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 2:20 PM
A very strong piece filled with metaphors that speak of modern times. Looks like a real winner. Good luck in the contest.
One Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Powerful write Frederic, sadly some people never learn.. Well written..
Emu Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 4:01 PM
Love the title! Some wise thoughts contained in this piece, enjoyed the read this morning. All the best. Craig
Lane Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 2:42 PM
This is outstanding, Frederic. The crowds today shout out the wrong name, just as they did when Jesus was accused. God had His purpose...prophecy had to be fulfilled. History really does repeat itself.
Smith Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Don't need a contest to get an "Atta Boy" for this one Frederic. Bravo my friend...
Sands Avatar
September 25, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Very well written Frederic! I hope this does well in the contest :)
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