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The Descent of Man

Knowledge and wisdom are not found in the chaotic crowd's cacophony of voices caused by fear and frustration They gather like swarms of locusts on emotional wings of hysteria Their beating sound swallows intellect creating perpetual hate and anxiety brought to them by their own failures and frailties None...which they chose to recognize or deem worthy of introspection Crowds easily led by puppetmasters who have spiraled down to the depths of depravity as they pull on the strings of discord tied to patriotic fervor Exhumed in a kaleidoscope of hollow memories from history...crowds don't remember As they turn their anger into a coming apocalypse where they sell their souls to their masters as they did once before When they called out " Give us Barabbas " Let the Christ die with his last spoken words " Forgive them... for they know not what they do " 9/25/17 contest 8 word challenge-4

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Date: 10/20/2017 1:36:00 PM
A very deep thought out poem my friend. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 10/19/2017 8:20:00 PM
A strong well thought out write Frederic
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:41:00 AM
Wow! Searing truth telling, Frederic. So many great lines ... they gather like swarms of locusts on emotional wings of hysteria. Crowds easily led by puppetmasters ... as they pull on strings of discord tied to patriotic fervor. And no, they don't remember, they have Adolf amnesia. Great message poem. Great title as well. Love and peace always.
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Date: 10/9/2017 3:52:00 AM
Eloquent, perceptive, insightful and evocative. A remarkable poem, Frederic.
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Date: 10/3/2017 5:03:00 AM
Fantastic poem Frederic. You made this sound so easy. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/30/2017 1:14:00 PM
Frederic, CONGRATULATIONS on a super win with this his amazing write !
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Date: 9/28/2017 11:39:00 PM
Excellent truths portrayed in a lovely poem, Frederic, congratulations on your first place win:)
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Date: 9/28/2017 5:51:00 PM
Another wonderful sonnet Frederic, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 9/28/2017 5:18:00 PM
Powerful poem, Frederic. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/28/2017 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic! :)
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Date: 9/28/2017 12:32:00 PM
Another wonderful write Frederick, worthy of a fine first place!
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Date: 9/27/2017 2:20:00 PM
A very strong piece filled with metaphors that speak of modern times. Looks like a real winner. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/25/2017 4:03:00 PM
Powerful write Frederic, sadly some people never learn.. Well written..
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Date: 9/25/2017 4:01:00 PM
Love the title! Some wise thoughts contained in this piece, enjoyed the read this morning. All the best. Craig
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:42:00 PM
This is outstanding, Frederic. The crowds today shout out the wrong name, just as they did when Jesus was accused. God had His purpose...prophecy had to be fulfilled. History really does repeat itself.
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Date: 9/25/2017 2:10:00 PM
Don't need a contest to get an "Atta Boy" for this one Frederic. Bravo my friend...
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Date: 9/25/2017 1:35:00 PM
Very well written Frederic! I hope this does well in the contest :)
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