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The Derelict Country Railway Station

The shiny, silver gleam of wheel polished railway lines have been dulled by a thick scab of rust. Weeds have colonized the stoney ballast, the wooden sleepers have rotted away to dust. The bush has closed in, dissolving the once clear perspectives of distance into a leafy clutter of nearby mallee trees. I stand on the platform, invite my thoughts to populate the scene. Cracked, rutted asphalt extends to what would have been the length of two or three carriages long. I wonder who would have stood here all those years ago when steam trains screeched and shuddered to a stop. Who would have got on. A young girl or boy perhaps, stomachs tightened with fear on their way to boarding school, first time away from the farm. A veteran or a grandmother with an appointment at a city hospital about to be told the bad news. Maybe a family, a newly married couple heading for a weekend holiday with tickets to a football match, picture show or a visit to the zoo. The sad, solitary figure of a teenage mother clothed to cover her secret, escaping from shame. I wince at the thought of how it was back then. Time passes. I walk back to the car and drive off leaving no trace of my visit except for a memory lodged now in a diminishing perspective that is fast closing in behind me.

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Date: 6/17/2024 8:13:00 PM
Paul, I'm wondering: Have you ever written short stories or novels? Your eye's attention to detail and your mind's gift for description beg me to 'pop this question.' -- Wondering and Wandering, Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 2:02:00 AM
Hi Gershon. I'm afraid I suffer from an incorrigible bias towards poetry...distilled essence compared to brewed volume. My attention to detail is the way I try and make the observed come alive...my attempt to honor and celebrate creation. I like to feast the senses rather than nibble. Heartfelt thanks for reading my work Gershon...
Date: 6/17/2024 1:15:00 PM
You hit upon an unknown variable here Paul, as it would appear time is erasing the railway station from existence, still you ponder those passengers of old, with a very plausible and meaningful sense of how they once felt at certain points in its history, love the perspective taken here and how you closed this one out, brilliant, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 1:50:00 AM
Value your comments David...appreciated. Railway history and its skeletal remains is always worth a visit, a storehouse of memories, raw material to stir inspiration. Cheers, Paul
Date: 6/17/2024 8:29:00 AM
Fascinating Paul, I had similar thoughts recently looking in the charity shop for a suitcase I could abandon abroad (I'm travelling back on a cheaper flight so luggage allowance discrepancy) there were an abundance of cases from 1940s onwards from a donation. One with the college and home address inside. I imagined all their journeys and couldn't buy one just to dump it, so got a modern one and hoped someone else would give them a good home. It's interesting to cross paths with the past.
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 1:39:00 AM
Perhaps you could use your experience as raw material for a poem...such intersections are rich grounds for the imagination. Thanks for reading the poem DD and sharing your take...take care dear friend.

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