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The Derelict Country Railway Station

The shiny, silver gleam
of wheel polished railway lines
have been dulled by a thick scab 
of rust. Weeds have colonized 
the stoney ballast, the wooden
sleepers have rotted away to dust.
The bush has closed in, dissolving 
the once clear perspectives
of distance into a leafy clutter
of nearby mallee trees.
 
I stand on the platform, invite
my thoughts to populate the scene.
Cracked, rutted asphalt extends 
to what would have been the length
of two or three carriages long. 
I wonder who would have stood here
all those years ago when steam
trains screeched and shuddered 
to a stop. Who would have got on.

A young girl or boy perhaps, 
stomachs tightened with fear 
on their way to boarding school,
first time away from the farm.
A veteran or a grandmother 
with an appointment at a city hospital 
about to be told the bad news. Maybe
a family, a newly married couple
heading for a weekend holiday
with tickets to a football match,
picture show or a visit to the zoo.
The sad, solitary figure 
of a teenage mother clothed to cover 
her secret, escaping from shame.
I wince at the thought
of how it was back then.

Time passes. I walk back to the car 
and drive off leaving no trace
of my visit except for a memory
lodged now in a diminishing 
perspective that is fast 
closing in behind me.


Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 6/17/2024 8:13:00 PM
Paul, I'm wondering: Have you ever written short stories or novels? Your eye's attention to detail and your mind's gift for description beg me to 'pop this question.' -- Wondering and Wandering, Gershon
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 2:02:00 AM
Hi Gershon. I'm afraid I suffer from an incorrigible bias towards poetry...distilled essence compared to brewed volume. My attention to detail is the way I try and make the observed come alive...my attempt to honor and celebrate creation. I like to feast the senses rather than nibble. Heartfelt thanks for reading my work Gershon...
Date: 6/17/2024 1:15:00 PM
You hit upon an unknown variable here Paul, as it would appear time is erasing the railway station from existence, still you ponder those passengers of old, with a very plausible and meaningful sense of how they once felt at certain points in its history, love the perspective taken here and how you closed this one out, brilliant, cheers David
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Paul Willason
Date: 6/19/2024 1:50:00 AM
Value your comments David...appreciated. Railway history and its skeletal remains is always worth a visit, a storehouse of memories, raw material to stir inspiration. Cheers, Paul

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