The Depths of Black and White

What the eye can see
                        or heart can feel,
we fondle nerves of the mind
to perceive. In a black and white
   photo hanging bare, unframed, 
received by  my reflection
                                              falling 
from a beige-colored page.
Melding with shapes of sky
and curves of cool serenity,
a rainy day frozen in love 
as clouds congregate above
and from umderneath street lights
     in still drops of rain -
photographed and shared.
                             I feel haunted by this vision,
an artist’s gray eyes seep into my soul.   
We, two, connect, our storm
   fueled layers - 
all black, white; the shadows between.
I make a wish here, 
found in this moment, 
pervious in timeless perception.
In absence of color, I see more 
than storms in ominous skies, 
I see hope in bold and fading
light, temptation-
                             heavens and earth
in beautiful discord.
What the eye can see 
           or the heart can feel,
beauty animates each part of the whole,
in every transparent drop of rain 
every dark and light cloud 
                                     encircling our touch. 



3/7/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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George   Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Beautiful! Ronda. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Great writing. Elaine
Martin Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 1:35 PM
Like the different aspects of black and white in this write. Congratulations Rhonda! :-)
Kroll Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 12:06 AM
I love how you took your inspiration from a black and white pic. Great win! Kathy
Roberts Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Frankly, I don't envy the judges job of choosing, so well written, congratulations!
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 1:24 PM
So well done Rhonda, congratulations...
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 12:53 PM
A 7 for your thought-provoking, WINNING poem, Rhonda! Janice
Krampe Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 12:26 PM
Love you poem, Rhonda - congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 5:14 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 4:06 AM
Congrats on ur beautiful top place winning write Rhonda!
La France Avatar
April 1, 2015 at 6:43 AM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully written poem, A7
Roper Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 11:32 AM
Back to congratulate on your wonderful win. Blessings eve
Nunez Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 10:56 AM
Beautiful rendition on the black and white theme, Rhonda. Congratulations on your top win! Kim :)
Carmack Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Love the poem and the pic. Congrats.
Haight Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 6:17 PM
Hi Rhonda, congratulations on your 1st Place win for this lovely poem that gives so much insight into the glory of the perception of black and white art. Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful number One win with this outstanding poem Rhonda!
Callus Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Both creative and beautiful poem, Rhonda. a 7 rating to you, and congrats on a worthy top win! Hugs // paul
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 9:22 PM
emotions that the eyes can stare to cause the heart react 7
Onclaud Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 5:04 PM
vivid portrayal of black-white symbols, rhonda... how creative.. huggs
Allison Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 9:54 AM
You have captured the mood of the picture so well Rhonda - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Hopper Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Beautiful poem
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 7, 2015 at 8:40 AM
You have explored The Depths of Black and White very well my friend...beauty lives within each part of the whole, in every dark and light cloud around...simply fabulous...Loved it. A winner for me. GL in the contest.Love.>>>>Your friend
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