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The Depths of Black and White

What the eye can see
                        or heart can feel,
we fondle nerves of the mind
to perceive. In a black and white
   photo hanging bare, unframed, 
received by  my reflection
                                              falling 
from a beige-colored page.
Melding with shapes of sky
and curves of cool serenity,
a rainy day frozen in love 
as clouds congregate above
and from umderneath street lights
     in still drops of rain -
photographed and shared.
                             I feel haunted by this vision,
an artist’s gray eyes seep into my soul.   
We, two, connect, our storm
   fueled layers - 
all black, white; the shadows between.
I make a wish here, 
found in this moment, 
pervious in timeless perception.
In absence of color, I see more 
than storms in ominous skies, 
I see hope in bold and fading
light, temptation-
                             heavens and earth
in beautiful discord.
What the eye can see 
           or the heart can feel,
beauty animates each part of the whole,
in every transparent drop of rain 
every dark and light cloud 
                                     encircling our touch. 



3/7/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/26/2017 6:12:00 PM
Beautiful! Ronda. Many congrats on your top-notch win. Great writing. Elaine
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Date: 2/23/2017 1:35:00 PM
Like the different aspects of black and white in this write. Congratulations Rhonda! :-)
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Date: 2/23/2017 12:06:00 AM
I love how you took your inspiration from a black and white pic. Great win! Kathy
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:42:00 PM
Frankly, I don't envy the judges job of choosing, so well written, congratulations!
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Date: 2/22/2017 1:24:00 PM
So well done Rhonda, congratulations...
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:53:00 PM
A 7 for your thought-provoking, WINNING poem, Rhonda! Janice
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Date: 2/22/2017 12:26:00 PM
Love you poem, Rhonda - congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/3/2015 5:14:00 PM
Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2015 4:06:00 AM
Congrats on ur beautiful top place winning write Rhonda!
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Date: 4/1/2015 6:43:00 AM
Rhonda, congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautifully written poem, A7
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Date: 3/31/2015 11:32:00 AM
Back to congratulate on your wonderful win. Blessings eve
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Date: 3/31/2015 10:56:00 AM
Beautiful rendition on the black and white theme, Rhonda. Congratulations on your top win! Kim :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 11:14:00 PM
Love the poem and the pic. Congrats.
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:17:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, congratulations on your 1st Place win for this lovely poem that gives so much insight into the glory of the perception of black and white art. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/30/2015 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful number One win with this outstanding poem Rhonda!
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Date: 3/30/2015 2:56:00 PM
Both creative and beautiful poem, Rhonda. a 7 rating to you, and congrats on a worthy top win! Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:22:00 PM
emotions that the eyes can stare to cause the heart react 7
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Date: 3/7/2015 5:04:00 PM
vivid portrayal of black-white symbols, rhonda... how creative.. huggs
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Date: 3/7/2015 9:54:00 AM
You have captured the mood of the picture so well Rhonda - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:54:00 AM
Beautiful poem
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:40:00 AM
You have explored The Depths of Black and White very well my friend...beauty lives within each part of the whole, in every dark and light cloud around...simply fabulous...Loved it. A winner for me. GL in the contest.Love.>>>>Your friend
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