The Depths

A mucky puddle
still holds the reflected night.
Two maundering starlings
peck at the dark pool
as if fishing.
One worm wriggles up,
the birds don't seem inclined
to eat it
one bubble in the puddle
surfaces -
I sense a kraken.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rolland Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 4:34 PM
beautiful imagery, icould see the scene, very talented indeed yann
Ashford Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Thank you Yan, much obliged to you for this positive review. Cheers E
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