Get Your Premium Membership

The Defiant Giant In a Robin Reliant

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Terry Flood.


And the beanstalk fell and the giant as well And the giant lay there dead I swear to you I thought it true It seems I was misled Though the giant bled he raised his head And said I want my goose And the coins - that Jack purloined As I enjoyed a snooze And so behold the tale that’s told Implies that Jack’s the goody If this were not a tale of old He would have worn a hoody The giant knew just what to do Went round the dodgy dealers His car swiped from a bloke who liked Fixing up three wheelers Twelve foot fellow, car that’s yellow Torso through the roof Most unsightly, still drove sprightly ‘Where’s that thieving youth.’ Then he saw Jack who turned his back As though he hadn’t seen him He screeched his motor to a halt His tyres they were screaming A copper showed him handcuffs You’ll soon be wearing these The giant said good luck with that When your brains run down your knees The copper said Fee-Fi-Fo-Fum Is that not what you teach The giant said don’t ponder chum That old figure of speech But human kids invade my land Like nasty little bugs And when they’ve stolen all my stuff They sell it to buy drugs The copper looked at Jack and then he winked and then he grinned The big guy just behind me Tells me that you’ve sinned So Jack winked back, that’s funny that You can’t believe a giant Every time they speak, they lie And then act all defiant The giant said I’ve heard enough, I had no violent plan He grabbed the the cop in one big hand And crushed him like a can Composure cracked as Jack stepped back, He leaked a little puddle Your stuff is in my haversack I just got in a muddle The giant took a magic bean Which he forced Jack to swallow And as Jack’s skin turned slightly green He guessed at what might follow Leafy shoots grew from his mouth And many other places He started making stretched out shapes And strange contorted faces So Jack was paying for the sin Of selling magic plunder A beanstalk growing from within Was tearing Jack asunder One foot went up another down His head made for the sky The beanstalk twenty feet around And now a mile high The giant pushed against the stalk To lean it like a slope Climbed in his car (why would he walk?) He hoped the car would cope He climbed that stem in second gear With pedal to the metal But near the top he had to stop He had a score to settle Jacks severed head looked grey and dead But uttered an appeal You’re home in bed the giant said Just promise not to steal The giant drove into the the clouds Departing on three wheels The beanstalk broke and Jack awoke And to the cops he squeals A cop was killed because I robbed A most defiant giant Who drove up to the clouds In an old Robin Reliant Well coppers see so many loons They rarely even try ’em Which is why he’s not in jail And not in an asylum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/14/2021 6:03:00 AM
I much prefer this to the original. So much fun and delightful. Congrats on POTD!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/14/2021 11:13:00 AM
Thanks Richard, blimey, not often a sequel is deemed better than the original, so I’ll gladly accept that compliment. Terry
Date: 7/13/2021 4:33:00 PM
Quite the tall tale! Congratulations on POTD!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2021 5:47:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. ‘Tall’... very witty. Terry
Date: 7/13/2021 7:17:00 AM
This is a very entertaining flip on the story, Terry. Not only imaginative, but your double rhyming is excellent! Congratulations on being so well written as to have achieved the Poem of the Day!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2021 11:54:00 AM
A fine and welcome complement indeed, Jenna. If you’ve read the other comments, you’ll know I was pretty well astounded to get POTD. Nice to hear from you. Terry
Date: 7/13/2021 3:38:00 AM
Congratulations, a lovely take on what makes you happy and fearful. I also fear a world when all green is gone....A pleasure to read... have a wonderful day...
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/13/2021 4:04:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed, Delice. I don’t know if you saw my comments yesterday, that were erroneously directed to you. Don’t know what was happening, but eventually, I was able to delete them. Of course, if you didn’t see them, you’ll now think I’m nuts. C’est la vie. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 1:12:00 PM
This is truly a mental poem Terry, I won’t even ask how a Robin Reliant is supposed to climb your crazy beanstalk, but you got me imagining it and laughing, absolutely brilliant, congratulations on potd, cheers David
Login to Reply
Kavanagh  Avatar
David Kavanagh
Date: 7/12/2021 3:00:00 PM
And this one is indeed a piece of magic, I keep reading it over.
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 2:30:00 PM
Did no-one ever tell you that giants are magic? Glad you enjoyed it, David. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 12:10:00 PM
Wonderful allegory in the lines of Aesop, Terry. Congratulations on your POTD. Like the fables, lessons to be learned! All the best.
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Sam. Delighted that you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 11:21:00 AM
Very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Christuraj. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 10:15:00 AM
- A awesome poem, Terry - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:16:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Much appreciated. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 10:06:00 AM
I knew this was a winner, Terry, back with congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:22:00 AM
I’m far from conceited by nature, but I felt people would like it. POTD really caught me off guard though. I’m decidedly chuffed and more than grateful for your congrats, Eve. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 9:17:00 AM
What a neat story, Terry, unfolding in delightful quatrains and rhymes. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Congratulations on your POTD!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:29:00 AM
Initially convinced that people would close it down due to its length, I was gobsmacked when Tom told me I had POTD. I was 90% certain it was an error because I wasn’t informed by the site for about two more hours and then all my replies were going awol. Don’t know what that was about. Needless to say I’m well pleased, so thank you, Milt. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD win. What a cute/funny story/write. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...............
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. Pleased that you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 8:06:00 AM
A free flow...with great storytelling...Congratulations on POTD.
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:31:00 AM
Thank you, Arturo. I’m glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 7:55:00 AM
Epic revision, Terry. Huzzah! Congrats on POTD. ~ Gershon
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:36:00 AM
Thanks very much, Gershon. Coming on the heels of a block, I was relieved to write something ‘likeable’ (my previous effort went down like a lead balloon), so POTD came as a welcome bonus. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 5:51:00 AM
You are a gifted raconteur, Terry! Congrats on POTD!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 11:40:00 AM
Thanks for you visit and your congrats, much appreciated. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 4:23:00 AM
TOO FUNNY TERRY!!! When can we expect the next in the series of "Untangled Fairy Tales"....
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 4:48:00 AM
Thanks so much, John. I’m having weird issues with soup at the moment, so if you don’t get this reply, apologies to whoever does. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 4:22:00 AM
This is awesome Terry, Congrats on POTD!!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 4:49:00 AM
Thanks Mike. Funny, only yesterday I was congratulating you on your own POTD. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 4:12:00 AM
I made this a fave the moment i read it, should be made into a pantomime script! many congrats on POTD I am so happy for you Terry we need more humour on soup and in our lives!:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 4:51:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, and thanks for the fave. Will do my best to keep it up (ooh er) ;-) Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 3:21:00 AM
Brilliant! Great read -- I love tall tales, and this is a great one.
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 4:52:00 AM
Thanks Joe. Did reply earlier, but it vanished up its own beanstalk. ;-) Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 1:25:00 AM
What an imaginative and creative write. You told the story very well. Congratulations on Potd. Enjoy the honour
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 2:52:00 AM
Finally got something official at about 10.45 UK time. So I can now be officially chuffed. Thanks again, Rama. Terry
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 1:42:00 AM
Thanks, Rama, but you and Tom seem to know something that I don’t. Thanks for your congrats, but I won’t be making a speech just yet. Terry
Date: 7/12/2021 12:48:00 AM
Back with big congratulations Terry on POTD, a well deserved honour, enjoy. Tom
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 2:59:00 AM
I’ve got gremlins. Got notification at 10:45 UK time. Messaged Rama, but that message seemed to jump through hyperspace to another Souper, who’s name escapes me, so I can’t go in and delete it. I’m still confused about how POTD works as ‘Giant’ got 6 comments and one fave. Of course I’m delighted but would love to understand it. Terry
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/12/2021 1:44:00 AM
Speech speech speech lol
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/12/2021 1:40:00 AM
Of course I’d be delighted, Tom, but nothing other than your message (and now Rama’s) tells me that this is so. Thanks for your congrats but I’ll save the lap of honour for now. Don’t want to look like that Miss World contestant who was announced the winner only to then hear that dreaded word, ‘OOPS!’ ;-) Terry
Date: 7/10/2021 9:10:00 PM
I love your take of the fairy tale, Terry, especially making Jack swallow the magic bean. I am glad you brought him back to normal and letting him see his wrongly doings. A fav. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/11/2021 5:13:00 AM
Thanks, Eve. The wizard of Oz ‘home in bed’ style reprieve was a last minute decision to squeeze a mini moral in... contemplated reprieving the copper too but I decided 25 verses was quite enough. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the fave. Terry
Date: 7/10/2021 11:37:00 AM
Well done, indeed, Terry! You have exceptional imagination and talent, and the tilt of the Reliant speaks volumes!
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/10/2021 12:06:00 PM
Aha! Rico gets the prize for being first to point out that the make is Reliant, not Robin. It’s a strange thing that in the UK, the Reliant Robin is (was) frequently called The Robin Reliant... which is good luck for me, as otherwise, my title wouldn’t work. Thanks for your kind comment, Rico. Terry
Date: 7/10/2021 7:53:00 AM
Mr Flood. You have surpassed yourself. This is one helluva golden egg that you have laid before us...Just brilliant. So much thought has gone into this. A great read. Cheers - Gary
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/10/2021 8:50:00 AM
It all started with the title, followed by the first verse. Then I checked out the original tale to find that Jack was a right little tea leaf. The poor old giant was merely being a giant. With all that in mind the poem just flowed. Secretly (until now) I think it got so long only partly to get the tale told... but mainly because I so thoroughly enjoyed writing it. Glad you enjoyed it so much, Gary. Terry
Date: 7/10/2021 4:07:00 AM
Terry this is absolutely hilarious what a terrific tale, would make a wonderful pantomime script!:-) thanks for the huge giggles:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/10/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thanks Jan. I did my best to shorten it but there wasn’t a verse I didn’t want in there. Got a bit miffed trying to get the photo in, soup just wouldn’t play ball. Had to log out, twice and power down, twice, before it finally worked. Photo was mainly so that our international friends would know what a Robin Reliant was. Thanks again, Jan. Terry
Date: 7/10/2021 3:58:00 AM
Brilliant Terry, you've given new life to the story of jack. Tom
Login to Reply
Cunningham Avatar
Tom Cunningham
Date: 7/10/2021 6:44:00 AM
Lol, brilliant pic Terry, didn't see it first time round.
Flood Avatar
Terry Flood
Date: 7/10/2021 5:36:00 AM
Thanks,Tom. Glad you enjoyed. Always struck me that Jack was the villain: not only a thief, but a repeat offender. Did you read before or after photo was added.... boy, was that a job to get in. I wonder if it’s because my iPad memory is almost exhausted. Cheers Tom. Have a great - if wet - weekend. Terry

Book: Reflection on the Important Things