The Deer Love Your Blossoms

the deer love our taste sweet luxurious lily I miss your blossoms

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Jude Herrick

Date: 8/9/2019 1:33:00 AM

Gorging eyes white and rolled back in enjoyment. "Finally, someone with some taste" lol. Nice

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/9/2019 8:52:00 AM

Thank you. I do not even get to see my day lilies come out any more, there are four deer WAITING for the first tasty bit of color.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/7/2019 5:21:00 PM

Both beautiful but only one eats the other!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/7/2019 8:58:00 PM

I love the deer, but I barely get to see my blossoms.

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 8/7/2019 1:55:00 PM

It's scary to be loved that much! Reminds me of Where The Wild Things Are, "Oh please don't go- we'll eat you up- we love you so!" ;D

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/7/2019 8:58:00 PM

This is true, for sure, and a lovely reminder. My middle daughter's all-time-favorite book!