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The Deep Ocean of the Mind

THE DEEP OCEAN OF THE MIND The warm pebbles touch my foot, my sole, In the turbulent shallows of tide and wave. My waking self feels the moon and sun pull. And hidden in shells are beauteous oyster pearls Of a magical lustre seen in watery dreams: Galleon bullion from a billion seagirls. But in murky muddy layers, the hates and loves Of embedded past events undisturbed Cloy the skeletons in cupboards of past lives. Pressing my sleeping soul on the seabed dark: Beyond the headland and my protective shell, Cold-blooded reptilian monsters lurk. In this unmanned land far from the help of mermaiden, Tentacles grope up from the bed trying to reach the surface: Threatening to expose what’s hidden. Grand dreams are ground down, drowned, and end as sands In a dark land oft-sifted by watery muses, Where new events sink to be added as new oozes to old beds. In these sands of time of the weighty deep sunless, The tide of current events has no pull. Only memories exist : the fossil remains of my history timeless. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . (Form of this poem is tercet with slant rhyme) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Gautami's contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2012 7:34:00 AM
Congrats on your big win...different ! BG
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Date: 4/6/2012 2:31:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney a beautiful piece xx
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Date: 4/6/2012 1:09:00 AM
congrats Sidney on a wonderful writ and well deserved win luv.. happy easter blessings too..
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:42:00 PM
Ohhh [cupboards of past lifes!] [new oozes to old bed!] good ones!! and great wrap up! [I hope you are writing me a sonnet!]Congrad's on your win!
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Date: 4/5/2012 3:38:00 PM
Stunning work and I enjoyed it so! Loved the slant rhymes in these tercets...Many Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for supporting my contest. love, gautami
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