The Deadly Seven

My father wandered in like he always did
wearing his pride like a decades old varsity Letterman jacket
too stuck on what used to be to realize that his life was just as crappy and cracked as the jacket
too proud to ask for help
so he just sat on his recliner all day, out of a job and out of shits to give
looking like a hairy motionless two-timing two-toed sloth
thirsting lustfully after the women he studied in his magazines
and quenching that thirst with bottle after bottle of Jack
you could almost hear the bottle crying out his confessions as he drank 
"glug glug glut gluttony"
the smell of alcohol masked only by the stench of the envy he felt for his younger self
and yet at the same time amplified by the anger he had for growing old

My father, a class A stand up guy.


1/27/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Selfa Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations Hannah! You truly are deserving! :)-HANS
Gentry Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Excellent expression of a terrible situation none of us should have had to endure... Congratulations on your win.
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February 7, 2016 at 10:57 AM
Hannah, Congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA
Lawless Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 9:01 AM
Hannah, this poem exposes the erosion and lingering dissolution of hopelessness. The last couplet is brilliant(IMHO). I enjoyed the very "out of the box" take on the contest theme. Thanks for participating.
Turner Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Great poem but extremely distressing. It's truly sad what young people have to witness. Aim high, Hannah, your talent is your ticket.
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