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The Day's Flow

The morning melted into view As light flowed over the hill Although the wild wind still blew, Sunshine continued to spill Beams of brightness far and near Quickly shadows decorated the snow With pretty pictures to replace fear Opening a door, to the day’s flow Heidi Sands 3/15/21

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Patrick Edward Tarpey

Date: 3/18/2021 10:26:00 AM

I enjoyed this poem Heidi from Patrick

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/18/2021 1:46:00 PM

I am happy you enjoyed this. Thank you Patrick :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/15/2021 4:41:00 PM

Love your choice of images -- 'wild wind' ... 'sunshine continued to spill.' Now it's time to 'go with the flow!' Pretty poetry, here! Thanks, gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/16/2021 6:49:00 AM

Thank you for the kind feedback Gershon! I hope you have a nice day. Enjoy :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/15/2021 12:34:00 PM

Brightness and shadows--both great images atop the snow. Enjoyed your scenery, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2021 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. The brightness and delicate images on the snow are pretty. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Ken Rone

Date: 3/15/2021 11:29:00 AM

Is it still snowing there Heidi? An avalanch warning??? "view, hill, blew, spill. near, snow, fear, flow. So well hidden !!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/15/2021 11:33:00 AM

We had some light snow recently. Now, just very windy and frigid with arctic blast temps. Thank you for your visit and comment Ken :)