The Day They Closed the Brothel

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Homeless, destitute with nothing more then a backpack and cigarettes down the rabbit hole she went, no linen tablecloths just stricken wood, in a house of ill repute;. She could not refuse the hunkering of a horny man who lived by threats so she counted her bills and tucked them in her brassiere with a tear She cringed when glass smashed and grinded her teeth when she was cold it was a bordello made surreal by alcohol mellowed Johns who were so old A bawdy crib, (bagnio del innocente) bath for the innocent... a knocking shop that foiled the linen and gave shiners to young girls, no one cared in this disorderly place, where the stew was watered down with whiskey float Then came the raid that brought everything to a halt, in a gestalt moment she found freedom, perhaps her prayers were answered? Down to the river she went for a bath and a rest, it was then that she remembered her first time, it was incest * The wild caged bird had no other place to hide but in this fortress she slept for days on the grass beside a great big boulder, , all the wild animals in the forest thought she was a Princess. They let her sleep, and fed her pine nuts from the trees. Until this day, Gianna never mentioned the brothel to anyone, no even herself. Feb. 20, 2021

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Date: 3/6/2021 1:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Mystic! very touching.
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Date: 3/5/2021 10:18:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 7th place in the contest, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2021 7:26:00 AM
Ah, superb :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/20/2021 9:12:00 AM
WoW! This is quite the story told from the girl's side of the picture. What brought her to this place in life and how she got there. Why didn't she leave. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/20/2021 9:03:00 AM
O my, Mystic Rose Rose, what a poignant piece of work. I felt such empathy for the young girl...wanted to reach out to her and give her a home. Wonderfully-written.
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Date: 2/20/2021 8:29:00 AM
Mystic Rose Rose, I agree with the comments for your poem. So hard to understand the reality and deplorable conditions some poor souls face in life. -Richard
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Date: 2/20/2021 7:50:00 AM
An amazing write! Good luck for the contest!
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Date: 2/20/2021 6:08:00 AM
- So many who share her fate ... make me sad, Vie Rose - Great written for the contest, good luck :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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