The Day I Messed Up Lu Loo Poem Contest
I embrace you…you hold me tight
Descending onto my grateful knees-
your genuine adoration still sustains
Bound by love and affection"
I sense your essence in the breeze
Saturated in loneliness were you
""A million fairytales tremble at us,
Sweetheart, you are my perpetual connection,
My alleviation found in perfection
As the tempest rages in warm rains
Fleeting into the ebon night; for our love loses not insight
Never cursed or full of deep blight;
Sounds of swift ivory doves cry out,
They know how our love does outshine with flickering light
I knew the pain of loss and despair you carried with ease;
Yet you stay with me, longing for my hopelessness to cease,
Black ravens plague this existence,
Descending onto my grateful knees
Emerging from the dust I was found
Weeping in the forsaken land of my desolated heart’s remains;
The wind blows, and gusts prevail
Your genuine adoration still sustains
Intense obscurity of the calamity I faced before you attains-
For I am but a woman (*or man*) craving to be near you for all of eternity
and...
Bound by love and affection
And I shall feel this pure affection or you, my beloved…eternally
My alleviation found in perfection "
Contest: Lu’s Poem Switcha-roo Poetry
Sponsored by: Lu Loo
Date: I messed this poem up 10/02/2019
Lu Loo the original was sooooo beautiful
Copyright © Bobby May | Year Posted 2019
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