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THE DAWN OF SPRING

winter thaw begins snowdrops peeping through the snow raising sleepy heads Jan Allison 26th November 2014

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Date: 12/5/2014 9:49:00 AM
Love it. Absolutely brilliant, as always Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/5/2014 10:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Wayne:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/29/2014 2:21:00 PM
Excellent word pictures described here Neat ! Miken
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Date: 11/29/2014 3:05:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by Mike:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/28/2014 12:10:00 PM
Spring comes the buds, and what a lovely sight it is. Lovely Haiku Jan, James :) xx
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Date: 11/28/2014 12:15:00 PM
Need to bypass winter and get some warm spring sunshine back on our faces:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/27/2014 6:20:00 AM
Ahh!! Crocus no doubt...Enjoyed reading this one..I can just see the scene..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:43:00 AM
thanks so much Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/26/2014 7:59:00 PM
Great Haiku, guess that's cause you gots a high I. Q.!
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:43:00 AM
LOL I wish Maurice:-) hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/26/2014 6:16:00 PM
Well done, Jan...I would like to see more of these; writing a beauty like this one means that there are more in your poetic store. But it's not fair, skipping winter straight over to spring!! Goodnight and hugs. // paul
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Date: 11/26/2014 6:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Paul your encouragement spurs me on to try my best with my creativity - guess I've come a long way since I stated in February - still got so much to learn!. I had to try and skip winter Paul - I want to be able to abandon the thermal vest asap! lol Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/26/2014 5:04:00 PM
I saw that advice and I think it is good, jan. It's a very nice haiku. Your muse is being very clever these days!! Hope you had a lovely wednesday.
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Date: 11/26/2014 5:15:00 PM
Just mailed you and thanks for the comment:-) Hugs jan xxxx
Date: 11/26/2014 3:47:00 PM
That last line is pure (insert bad word) genius! Now that I've lost some weight I feel the cold like never before. Can't wait for spring!
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Date: 11/26/2014 3:51:00 PM
when dad became ill I lost nearly 6 kilos and I'm only petite anyway - get thermal vests Sebastian i can recommend them lol! Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/26/2014 6:27:00 AM
Jan. its wonderful. Snowdrops raising sleepy heads. They were hibernating wow. great haiku. God bless. Love XXXX rajat
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:15:00 AM
You got it in one Rajat:- hug Jan xxxx
Date: 11/26/2014 6:02:00 AM
Superb! Bravo dear, Jan! Only spring... too far away! A seven!
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Date: 11/26/2014 7:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Demetrios:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 11/26/2014 5:02:00 AM
Wow..What a beauty!To my fvs..I can see this being published: )
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Date: 11/26/2014 5:17:00 AM
Thanks Charma - i submitted 2 haikus to that site you recommended but have heard nothing so far. Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/25/2014 10:47:00 PM
Here's hoping it is a quick winter...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/26/2014 1:45:00 AM
We can only hope so Tim:-) hugs Jan x
Date: 11/25/2014 10:31:00 PM
Now here I am dreaming of spring and Christmas is yet to come; 8 more inches of snow tonight and into tomorrow here in upper Michigan! Can't wait for the snowdrops!
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Date: 11/26/2014 1:44:00 AM
Oh Dan I couldn't cope with that much snow and I hate to feel cold hence the thermal vests lol - will just send you extra hugs for warmth:-) Hugs Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/25/2014 6:46:00 PM
nice nice image - you are on the right track! you don't need to say winter Jan because you have shown us winter ;) (the thaw begins/ as snowdrops peep through the snow: sleeping heads rise)
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Date: 11/25/2014 6:56:00 PM
Thanks for the advice Debbie I wrote it on my lunch break at school:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 11/25/2014 5:45:00 PM
Most excellent -- added it to my fav! I love the idea of the winter sleep -- all warm and cozy under the melting snow!
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:47:00 PM
Thanks David - you inspire ME with your wonderful haiku's - i wrote this and the other poem I posted today on my school lunch break lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 11/25/2014 5:24:00 PM
another read, succint, again the format and topic are good companions, I did my Spring as a sonnet, hope it's worth a read, keep writing Mike
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Date: 11/25/2014 5:27:00 PM
ooh will drop by:-) Hugs Jan xxx