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The Dawn

The Sun rises... I know the supposed science of light, bips and wavy lines of pulsed propagation like a heart like emotions~ how human feelings start and stop, the forward/backward of time -- the morning news our repeated proclamations stagnation and regressive signatures, announced and printed shouted over electronic airways man’s modern-day gazettes dawn’s transparent lush on my face, I admire and study – the brushwork of gleams~ patterns of my traveled summits and depressions indented zebra primrose blossoming, in short what love created such marvelous striations? Say ye a God~ surely even the moron in glaring absence of other proof would not guess less? Him/Her? Our Blessed Hermaphrodite of sentient-being creating, of morphing-realms unending evolving salacious advances of life mating, entangling, imparting fond mysteries -- lips of roses unfurling, curling, inviting nearer breaths for uninhibited exploration – such exposure awakens and sleeps yet we sense beyond-maturity delve the wizard behind the curtain all us Dorothys trying to find a true way home imaginable, at least a steady firmament though we slip precipitously – My thought, to dust, clean and change the sheets, as a new warmth attempts to re-freshen recover nature’s veiled cycles our nightly often deeply staining retreats

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Date: 3/5/2024 2:32:00 PM
A creation of emotion and future unknowns. It's very thought provoking
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/6/2024 2:10:00 AM
Hi Hilda; thank you; have a wonderful evening. Blessings.
Date: 3/5/2024 1:31:00 PM
a thought provoking poem, Joe, that made gave me pause. I suppose we are like Dorothy--all searching for a way back Home. Therein lies our hope and our faith...nicely done, Sara
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Date: 3/5/2024 1:14:00 PM
some deep imagery and profound thought here, Jay. Love the reference to us being like Dorothy.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/5/2024 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea; I made change. Blessings my friend.
Date: 3/5/2024 5:40:00 AM
Your feels deep, my friend, with thoughtful lines such as these: how human feelings start and stop, the forward/backward of time -- the morning news our repeated proclamations...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/5/2024 8:09:00 AM
Hi Vijay; thank you for taking time to read and leave a thoughtful comment. It means a lot to me. Blessings.
Date: 3/4/2024 6:26:00 PM
You words evoke memories of hope that I truly believe keeps us going, nicely penned Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/4/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Vie; sort of far-out in some respects...so I am very pleased to see your positive comment. Have a great evening. Keep singing your lovely words.
Date: 3/4/2024 12:05:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Joe...love the line :"lips of roses unfurling, curling, inviting nearer breaths for uninhibited exploration" ... what a creation :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/4/2024 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Anne; so pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings.

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