The Dawn

The Sun rises...

I know the supposed science 
of light,
bips and wavy lines of
pulsed propagation

like a heart

like emotions~ 

how human feelings start
and stop, the forward/backward of time -- 
the morning news
our repeated proclamations 

stagnation and regressive 
signatures, announced and printed 
shouted over electronic airways
man’s modern-day gazettes

dawn’s transparent lush
on my face,
I admire and study – 
the brushwork of gleams~ 
patterns of my traveled summits
and depressions indented

zebra primrose blossoming, in short
what love created such marvelous
striations? Say ye a God~ surely even
the moron
in glaring absence of other proof
would not guess less?

Him/Her? Our Blessed Hermaphrodite
of sentient-being creating, of morphing-realms
unending evolving

salacious advances of life mating, 
entangling, imparting fond mysteries --  
lips of roses unfurling, curling, inviting
nearer breaths for uninhibited exploration – 

such exposure awakens and sleeps
yet we sense beyond-maturity

delve the wizard behind the curtain

all us Dorothys

trying to find a true way home
imaginable, at least a steady firmament though we
slip precipitously – My thought, to dust, clean and change

the sheets, as a new warmth attempts to re-freshen 

recover nature’s veiled cycles our nightly often deeply
staining retreats

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Date: 3/5/2024 2:32:00 PM
A creation of emotion and future unknowns. It's very thought provoking
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/6/2024 2:10:00 AM
Hi Hilda; thank you; have a wonderful evening. Blessings.
Date: 3/5/2024 1:14:00 PM
some deep imagery and profound thought here, Jay. Love the reference to us being like Dorothy.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/5/2024 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea; I made change. Blessings my friend.
Date: 3/5/2024 5:40:00 AM
Your feels deep, my friend, with thoughtful lines such as these: how human feelings start and stop, the forward/backward of time -- the morning news our repeated proclamations...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/5/2024 8:09:00 AM
Hi Vijay; thank you for taking time to read and leave a thoughtful comment. It means a lot to me. Blessings.
Date: 3/4/2024 6:26:00 PM
You words evoke memories of hope that I truly believe keeps us going, nicely penned Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/4/2024 7:57:00 PM
Thank you, Vie; sort of far-out in some respects...so I am very pleased to see your positive comment. Have a great evening. Keep singing your lovely words.
Date: 3/4/2024 12:05:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Joe...love the line :"lips of roses unfurling, curling, inviting nearer breaths for uninhibited exploration" ... what a creation :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/4/2024 4:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for the encouragement, Anne; so pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings.
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