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The Darkest - Blackest Tuesday (Part Lll)

Now Children the pink and purple pails are for the girls, blue and green for the boys
We are going berry picking down by the stone wall Mr. Bethel said we could pick his berries 
too
The stone wall off limits to the Webb household, Bobby, Joe and Jim had the scars to prove it
Oh, “MOM“, (coil in fear, no crop) Thank-you What did Millie say; Are we going to make pies?
Ma’am didn’t know sign language, of course we will tell her she can wear the number 2 apron
Dotty, George, and I started running to the end of our property Slow down They’re 
excited “Mom”
I know Alice listen you older kids will be paired up with the younger ones: Alice, George and 
Harry
Virginia, William and Dorothy; Joe Jim and Robert; Rebecca you’re the best signer, You and 
Mildred
Alice, yes Harry why did Ma’am say we could call her “MOM” my voice shakes when I say 
Mom
 I think all of us feel that way; but make hay while the sun shines, What?  Just let her be 
MOM today
Pick them ,don’t eat them Wow, Al ,that’s what Becky just said to Millie look Millie said they’re 
so sweet
You can read that from over here Yep Millie and Becky have been teaching me. You know 
what this means
Easy: I Love you too Where is George? Over there George your not suppose to be on that 
side of the wall
It’s sprinkling , my pails almost full come on George let’s go back to “Mom” Alice go get the 
other children
This is the first time since I’ve been here that we were all together, laughing and talking 
while Mom smiled
As we got to the steps of the porch the sky opened sheets of rain a bolt of lighting , a sonic 
boom of thunder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2013 3:50:00 PM
I am scared of thunder and lighting..... reading on...... Much love. Your S-N & P SuZ
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Date: 3/3/2012 11:25:00 PM
Very interesting...mut...keep...reading...(: Always, Laura
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Date: 3/15/2010 7:54:00 PM
'Ma’am didn’t know sign language' thats the worst part. ah, the thunder. always a sign of something. --going on
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Date: 2/10/2010 1:28:00 PM
Interesting children's conversation in this part .. shows how all bond together and fear the same thing ... good write HG.. onto part 4 .. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 12/14/2009 5:37:00 PM
I am still reading
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Date: 10/25/2009 10:45:00 AM
Well, so far, so good, but the sky opens up to warn of the impending wrath! Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 8/13/2009 11:51:00 AM
Suspense!!! What's next? I'm off to see.....
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Date: 7/19/2009 8:34:00 AM
You have captured our imaginations!! Wonderful story telling !!~ Carrie
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Date: 7/18/2009 2:15:00 PM
I keep wondering why the stone wall is off limits. And the narrator's distaste for calling "Ma'am" Mom is very intriguing. What will happen next? On to Part 4! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2009 10:03:00 PM
I was just "currant" pickin' with my grand-nephews and nieces last wkend! on a blufftop in Wisconsin! HG! love this great narrative!!! jimbo
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Date: 7/17/2009 9:59:00 PM
Harry, Im getting so caught up in this story...on the edge of my chair..so to speak. Millie, Joe, Jim Robert, Rebecca, Dotty..George, Alice..I love them all. You too. Barbara Jean
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