The Dark Poet

A waking up, do I, Dark Poet, need
to shake my creature core from sheltered sleep.
A seed has taken root as bitter weed
that sprouts from disappointments buried deep
inside me, where a well-hid wild thing
with armored skin lifts groggy head to breathe.
No fire escapes its mouth, for it must cling
to courtesy although its blood should seethe.
If roused, the beast could overstep its bounds
and though I’ve tamed it well, I sometimes hear
in dusky dreams its melancholy sounds.
Before the dawn its murmurs disappear.
On bitter weed subsists my dragon child.
Oh, should I let it rest. . . or wake the wild?


For Irma's Dark Poet contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Watt Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Circling back to our well-trod discussion of syllables, I'm curious if you pronounce 'wild' with two syllables, as your line 5 might suggest?
Watt Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:18 AM
You are a person of much complexity (that's high praise) and it comes out in the darker writes such as this with you wrestling with demons and dragons of disappointments in life. Interesting to read in the comments that SKAT A was going by the name Irma back in 2010.
Yvonne Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 6:56 AM
As good a sonnet as any I have read.
Nehls Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Great sonnet, Andrea. Sometimes the beast lurks so close to the surface the it is all we can do to keep it at bay. I believe we can tame that beast into civility and get our point or actions across in different ways. There is so much written into each line that I think I'll put this into my Faves so that I can read it again. Very deep and thoughtful words describing the battle of conscience. Very well done..... Robert.
Haick Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea! Always, a fascinating read from A POET! Peace, love, Audrey
Brooks Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 7:49 AM
Great read. Loved it! I'm usually a lighter side inspired type writer. I just started letting other emotions loose on paper.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Let it rest, Andrea! Congratulations on your success in the Dark Poet Contest sponsored by, SKAT a k a Irma, with this uniquely dark poem.
Crisci Avatar
May 23, 2010 at 11:31 AM
Congratulations on your well-merited win, Andrea. Reality as seen by a dark poet...trying to make the hardest decision: to " let the dragon child rest...or wake the wild?" Enjoy another honor added to your glory. Thanks for your kind comments. Love and hugs, Andrew.
Winter Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 8:48 AM
awesome win Andrea - warmest congrats! thanks for all your kind comments. I am coming off of a 3 day migraine and think I deleted my poem by accident. anyway, just wanted to thank you for being so kind and say congrats on your many wins. hugs, shar xo
Foster Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Congratulations,Andrea. Now this side has had an airing will we be seeing more of the darker side?...Luv Margaret
Gorelick Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 5:10 PM
I vote for the WILD...love this one. Its different and that is good. BG
Belt Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 4:14 PM
Great Write Andrea....congrats on your win.....thanks for your comments.....Larry
A  Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 1:52 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ANDREA, GAME A CHUCKLE 2 KNOW U WROTE THIS 1. I READ IT 4 TIMES 2 SEE IF YOU WHERE TALKING ABOUT A DRAGON. THANK U FOR MAKING IT TO MY CT..luv, IRMA
A   Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 10:50 AM
K, u got me congrats, dark Andrea. you earned it, what a write cngats, congrats, have a nice one,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in "The Dark Poet" contest sponsored by S K A T. Love, Carol
Flach Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Let it rest!!!!! Let it rest!!!!! Oh, what the heck, wake it up. Nice poem. Joe
A   Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:21 PM
lol, i saw your light , before this write of yours so i have to be nosssyyyy and see all the comotion. you sure did an awesome job. sweet, dark friend of mine. lol not close in reality,..p.d.
A  Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 3:30 PM
Reading them out loud. U got the meaning of the contest. LOve it Andrea, glad U made it for this one. So you can realese the wild. Have your self a wonderful day,, Skat
Sweetheart Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 9:47 AM
The Queen of the Sonnet strikes again with a beauty to beat all.. Andrea this one is so excellent I had to read it twice.. good luck in Irma's contest... hard to imagine u have a dark side at all... luv.. Linda-Marie..
Devonshire Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Compelling nightmares, Andrea. Very frightening! Good luck in the contest, but I'm with Joyce, I don't want to go down the path of a "dark poet" so I won't be pursuing this contest. Lee and Crystal in the Idol finals!! What an incredible battle that is going to be next week. Can't wait to see who wins. Both are sooo talented. Love, Carolyn
Austin Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Oh, boy! This is GOOD! The "creature core." I say one cannot help but "wake the wild" once in a while. You be da greatest! Love, Dave
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:16 AM
Reads like a winner..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 3:22 AM
Irma is going to have her hands full selecting from these exceptional Dark Poet poems. The best to you in the contest Andrea. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
Chachere Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 9:57 PM
thats scary. i can picture your sheltered sleep as your head trapping you in your dreams. a twisted mind you have, Mrs.Dietrich.lol.you're a thrill of creeps.your powerful eyes say it too, i've thought that at a silence for a while.(im joking.((maybe)))and thats what makes this poem oh too thrilling for the contest!!good luck. -Always&Forever Lynette
Foster Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:46 PM
Yes... a very creepy thing lurking in the dark recesses of half sleep. I think I would let it rest, no telling what might happen if you let it loose :):) good luck my friend, as if you need it...luv Margaret
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