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The Dark Poet

A waking up, do I, Dark Poet, need to shake my creature core from sheltered sleep. A seed has taken root as bitter weed that sprouts from disappointments buried deep inside me, where a well-hid wild thing with armored skin lifts groggy head to breathe. No fire escapes its mouth, for it must cling to courtesy although its blood should seethe. If roused, the beast could overstep its bounds and though I’ve tamed it well, I sometimes hear in dusky dreams its melancholy sounds. Before the dawn its murmurs disappear. On bitter weed subsists my dragon child. Oh, should I let it rest. . . or wake the wild? For Irma's Dark Poet contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/11/2020 9:23:00 AM
Circling back to our well-trod discussion of syllables, I'm curious if you pronounce 'wild' with two syllables, as your line 5 might suggest?
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Date: 8/11/2020 9:18:00 AM
You are a person of much complexity (that's high praise) and it comes out in the darker writes such as this with you wrestling with demons and dragons of disappointments in life. Interesting to read in the comments that SKAT A was going by the name Irma back in 2010.
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Date: 11/4/2014 6:56:00 AM
As good a sonnet as any I have read.
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Date: 7/16/2014 4:16:00 AM
Great sonnet, Andrea. Sometimes the beast lurks so close to the surface the it is all we can do to keep it at bay. I believe we can tame that beast into civility and get our point or actions across in different ways. There is so much written into each line that I think I'll put this into my Faves so that I can read it again. Very deep and thoughtful words describing the battle of conscience. Very well done..... Robert.
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Date: 5/30/2010 2:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea! Always, a fascinating read from A POET! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 5/27/2010 7:49:00 AM
Great read. Loved it! I'm usually a lighter side inspired type writer. I just started letting other emotions loose on paper.
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:40:00 AM
Let it rest, Andrea! Congratulations on your success in the Dark Poet Contest sponsored by, SKAT a k a Irma, with this uniquely dark poem.
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Date: 5/23/2010 11:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-merited win, Andrea. Reality as seen by a dark poet...trying to make the hardest decision: to " let the dragon child rest...or wake the wild?" Enjoy another honor added to your glory. Thanks for your kind comments. Love and hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/22/2010 8:48:00 AM
awesome win Andrea - warmest congrats! thanks for all your kind comments. I am coming off of a 3 day migraine and think I deleted my poem by accident. anyway, just wanted to thank you for being so kind and say congrats on your many wins. hugs, shar xo
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Date: 5/21/2010 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations,Andrea. Now this side has had an airing will we be seeing more of the darker side?...Luv Margaret
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:10:00 PM
I vote for the WILD...love this one. Its different and that is good. BG
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Date: 5/21/2010 4:14:00 PM
Great Write Andrea....congrats on your win.....thanks for your comments.....Larry
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Date: 5/21/2010 1:52:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS ANDREA, GAME A CHUCKLE 2 KNOW U WROTE THIS 1. I READ IT 4 TIMES 2 SEE IF YOU WHERE TALKING ABOUT A DRAGON. THANK U FOR MAKING IT TO MY CT..luv, IRMA
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:50:00 AM
K, u got me congrats, dark Andrea. you earned it, what a write cngats, congrats, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in "The Dark Poet" contest sponsored by S K A T. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:09:00 PM
Let it rest!!!!! Let it rest!!!!! Oh, what the heck, wake it up. Nice poem. Joe
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:21:00 PM
lol, i saw your light , before this write of yours so i have to be nosssyyyy and see all the comotion. you sure did an awesome job. sweet, dark friend of mine. lol not close in reality,..p.d.
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Date: 5/20/2010 3:30:00 PM
Reading them out loud. U got the meaning of the contest. LOve it Andrea, glad U made it for this one. So you can realese the wild. Have your self a wonderful day,, Skat
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Date: 5/20/2010 9:47:00 AM
The Queen of the Sonnet strikes again with a beauty to beat all.. Andrea this one is so excellent I had to read it twice.. good luck in Irma's contest... hard to imagine u have a dark side at all... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/20/2010 8:12:00 AM
Compelling nightmares, Andrea. Very frightening! Good luck in the contest, but I'm with Joyce, I don't want to go down the path of a "dark poet" so I won't be pursuing this contest. Lee and Crystal in the Idol finals!! What an incredible battle that is going to be next week. Can't wait to see who wins. Both are sooo talented. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:28:00 AM
Oh, boy! This is GOOD! The "creature core." I say one cannot help but "wake the wild" once in a while. You be da greatest! Love, Dave
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:16:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 5/20/2010 3:22:00 AM
Irma is going to have her hands full selecting from these exceptional Dark Poet poems. The best to you in the contest Andrea. Thank you for your kind comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:57:00 PM
thats scary. i can picture your sheltered sleep as your head trapping you in your dreams. a twisted mind you have, Mrs.Dietrich.lol.you're a thrill of creeps.your powerful eyes say it too, i've thought that at a silence for a while.(im joking.((maybe)))and thats what makes this poem oh too thrilling for the contest!!good luck. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/19/2010 6:46:00 PM
Yes... a very creepy thing lurking in the dark recesses of half sleep. I think I would let it rest, no telling what might happen if you let it loose :):) good luck my friend, as if you need it...luv Margaret
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