The Dark Hours L B

The Dark Hours L. B. A piercing cold has crept into my bones – today ! A numbing chill has penetrated my soul – today ! A thick, chocking lump grows in my throat – today ! A pressure began to swell in my sinuses – today ! A breaking of trust could be felt in my heart – today ! A crashing down of my world could be heard – today ! All came on the “ hush ” to one in the back ground – today ! B. J. “A” 2 December 8th 2003

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Brooke Dylan

Date: 6/13/2014 12:31:00 PM

WILLIAM I CAN FEEL YOUR ANGUISH AND pain..dear heart... a crashing down of my world could be heard.. wow .. I can relate.. hugs to you Brooke.

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 6/13/2014 2:42:00 PM

Greetings Brooke : How great to see a word or two from you and I must thank you for taking the time to visit, for the comments and for the understanding, although it saddens me to think that you, or anyone else for that matter, has had to experience what most of my life has been all about in order to “ I CAN FEEL YOUR ANGUISH AND pain..dear heart...”, and “ a crashing down of my world could be heard.. wow .. I can relate ” have that understanding / empathy . I see, in “ Moments, My Inner Self, I was out riding today ( great writes ) ” the essence of your understanding and empathy for this I am truly sorry !!! Hugs and kisses to you Brooke. Have a great weekend !!! B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )