The Dandelion Seeds In Flight

Soft, fuzzy round ball Touched by the wind pieces Enter in orbit

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James Fraser

Date: 9/10/2009 11:10:00 AM

And the wind sure doe's blow them>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2009 4:44:00 AM

They may be pretty in flight but not in yards to reproduce. Excellent Haiku Sara. Love, Carol

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/9/2009 9:45:00 PM

Sara.. Very Nice... I Love Dandelions... they're very dainty - - - just one faint blow and there they go... Your Poem reminded me of that... (Oh... and can't you eat dandelions?) MoonBee

John Freeman

Date: 9/9/2009 8:00:00 PM

When I was a child I use to help with the wind, just to watch them go into orbit. smile, Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2009 12:57:00 PM

Oh, and how the wind spreads these dandelions! Lovely haiku, Sara. Love, Carolyn