The Dandelion and My Wife Strike Again

I pondered the dandelion and its dazzling deed.
Some folks think this fluffy flower is a worthless weed.

But deep down inside its transparent fluff,
a thousand tassels hide in a sphere of spiracle stuff.

Embryonic umbrellas cuddle in cocoons,
until April’s sunshine tells us a miracle is coming soon.

Mystified and wondering, I was shaken from my dream,
and abruptly stopped my pondering when I heard a scream,

As my wife descended like an Afghan bomb!
“Go out and mow the weeds,” she said, “which last year you called lawn!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/22/2011 5:51:00 AM
hehehehe..nice write=))
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Date: 2/7/2011 8:33:00 PM
Excellent set of couplets. I especially liked the last one. I enjoyed reading this presentation.
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:24:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:36:00 AM
And now you know why we wives and gardeners call it a weed. Very funny. Thank you for your kind comments.. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:35:00 AM
LOL Dandelions take a bad rap, James. This is so cute! I'll send you a soup mail explaining how to view the winners' list. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:09:00 PM
Good one..Those little beauties manage to multiply....They say that they were brought over here from England as a food source..Sara
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:43:00 PM
lol....Too funny my friend.....Larry
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Date: 2/2/2011 4:43:00 PM
I can certainly relate to dandelion, Good poem. And I can't resist blowing those little white thistles off.
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