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The Dancing Hall

rain loves the rice fields visuals of dancing hall the peasant girl smiles July 7, 2018

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Casarah Nance

Date: 7/10/2018 8:14:00 AM

very picturesque ! ;)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/10/2018 4:12:00 AM

A rewlly lovely image you have penned of a peasant girl dancing and smiling, good luck and have a really nice day

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2018 4:37:00 PM

Lovely image you portrayed with the smiling girl, Probir.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/7/2018 11:20:00 AM

what a joyful 'ku... nicely executed, probir...huggs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/7/2018 8:22:00 AM

Lovely, Probir!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/7/2018 8:09:00 AM

I'm smiling too!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/7/2018 2:25:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 7/6/2018 11:47:00 PM

Novel .. Pearl? Rice fields ... peasants ... birth ... toil - these are the fragments in my head trying to recall a book I read decades ago that your haiku took me to. I think it was rather famous - oh, darn my memory. I really enjoyed where your mind went, but who knows how long I'll remember it? (Laughing) Poetry hugs ... CayCay