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The Dancer and the Duende, Poems That Paint a Picture 3

The Dancer and the Duende Red skirt! Lithe body! She dances! Flagging voluminous curtains of crimson, daring the Duende to charge --- she catches his face, his beard, his breath; stealing its petals with her teeth, she spins! Dared to take it back, he comes, seizing the dusk with both hands, for tomorrow, the hibiscus in her hair will be dead. Poems that Paint a Picture 3, contest 9-22-2017

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Date: 10/8/2017 6:37:00 AM
How is this quinceanera. Poem is great and love its content.
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Jack Webster
Date: 10/8/2017 6:50:00 AM
It's not quinceanera.There is no flamenco, latin(o/a), or hispanic tag option. Quinceanera was the only latin-specific tag the site offered, so even though it is inacurrate specifically, it was the only way to tag it in a way that was latin-culture oriented. I might have overlooked a better tag option. if you find a better one, please let me know; I'm happy to use it.
Date: 9/27/2017 2:57:00 PM
Back again Jack to offer you my congratulations on your placement with your lovely poem.
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/28/2017 11:28:00 AM
thank you, Suan. You too!
Date: 9/26/2017 1:16:00 PM
Jack, I love this poem, CONGRATULATIONS!
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/27/2017 7:21:00 AM
thank you, Broken Wings!
Date: 9/26/2017 10:08:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/27/2017 7:21:00 AM
thankyou, Robert!
Date: 9/26/2017 7:13:00 AM
Congrats Jack!
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/27/2017 7:20:00 AM
thank you Vijay!
Date: 9/23/2017 8:37:00 PM
A beautiful, intense write Jack. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Jack Webster
Date: 9/23/2017 9:03:00 PM
thank you, Susan :)
Date: 9/22/2017 3:25:00 PM
Very effective short poem that describes the painting well--best wishes Jack for a win!
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Date: 9/22/2017 4:02:00 PM
yes; it could have been longer, perhaps. I wanted to capture the physical and emotional tension of the dance. Was worried the energy of a longer version might begin to sag or lose its freshness. Ill have to keep experimenting at home just for fun.

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