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The Dance of Jealousy

“The sight of a feather in a peacock’s tail, whenever I gaze at it, makes me feel sick.” – Charles Darwin With his train of covert feathers Fanned like a protractor, a Peacock stepped slowly Turning to catch right ray of light And holding on still, to be better judged By the alert single peahen Another peacock mustered up Gazing intensely ahead, Gracefully moving, carrying The weight of his trail effortlessly. Two males startled each other By the dance of jealousy, held Their gaze focused while Shaking, rattling & shivering The choosy peahen left. The Dance stopped, their Jealousy too.

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Date: 7/9/2024 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win in Miranda’s contest, a wonderful poem on ‘The Dance of Jealousy’ ~ Beryl
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/10/2024 8:22:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind words dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 7/8/2024 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Threveni! Enjoyed
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/8/2024 9:40:00 PM
Thank you dear friend for your kind visit. Your words bring joy, Blessings & Cheers dear poet.
Date: 7/8/2024 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Thriveni! What a wonderful take on the contest - the rivalry of two peacocks in a "dance of jealously!" Perfect subject and your imagery is as beautiful as peacock feathers! So happy to see this gem at the top of the winners list. Blessings to you.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/8/2024 9:38:00 PM
Thank you so much dear poet for your kind visit. I am flattered. Peacock being a symbol of beauty and pride is never seen as a wild bird that fights for a peahen and territory. I am glad it resonated. Thank you for the blessings dear poet. Cheers.
Date: 7/7/2024 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. I think the peacocks are such a beautiful sight and I even like their calls or songs. Sara K
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/7/2024 6:58:00 PM
Thank you for your kind visit. I am so glad you liked it. Peacocks are burdened by beauty dear poet. Blessings & cheers.
Date: 7/6/2024 8:20:00 PM
Peacocks are beautiful when they are strutting their stuff around. As pretty as they are I am not sure I want to see them in a dance of jealousy, as I think it might be an outright fight. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/7/2024 1:07:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words. Thank you for the placement and congratulations. Blessings & Cheers.

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