The Dance

Yesterday lingers in my memory today
Perched on a manicured hill after the last bell
All my friends surrounding me 
She strolls by, I catch blue eyes 
glancing quickly my way

A scented envelope...
I rent a white tuxedo for her Sorority Ball
She's dressed in full length blue silk 
Formally announced; I escort her 
through a flowered arch to that shining floor

The band plays a sweet, soulful slow-dance song
I nuzzle her neck, breathing in her perfume scent 
Shivering slightly, she snuggles ever closer 
humming the same melody softly in my ear...

11/29/16
Submitted for Brian Strand’s latest contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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La France Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 2:33 PM
Rest in peace, Tim, love Constance
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 11:52 PM
Gosh it has been maybe 7 years now since you passed away. Missing you today, buddy.
George   Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Dear Tim, I miss you. Like the song says, You were to beautiful for this world.
Horsman Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 8:13 PM
Re-Reading again my friend, wonderful poetry...RIP...Tim.
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May 22, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Tim, your kind and fun loving spirit is missed, but thankfully we can still feel it through your poetry.. rest in peace.
Sergi Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 2:38 PM
You poetically brought back memories of my youth of the weekly dances the 50's and 60's. wELL DONE, TIM!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 7:33 PM
You are missed so much Tim...I am thankful your lovely poetry remains here my friend. Thinking of you this Christmas. RIP dear friend! xxoo
Pinet Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Today I feel Tim's loss, for like many poets on this site he was an old friend. So many sad thoughts to contend with, here Tim found encouragement to write and share his thoughts with like mined souls. And it’s with a very heavy heart, that I must say farewell to Tim and wish him well on his spiritual journey. Rest in peace my friend, Emile.
La France Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Rest in Peace Tim.
Tripp Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Wish I had had the time to know you. I can certainly tell that you were loved by many...RIP, Tim.
Thomas Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:48 PM
I can't believe you're gone ... I just talked to you...
Tripp Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 9:50 AM
Feeling sad that just recently, he friended me on FB but didn't get the chance to know him. Feeling guilty...
George   Avatar
April 21, 2018 at 5:20 AM
Hi Tim, Such a beautiful romantic piece. It has been a long time since you have posted. Me too...but I come back here from time to time to check in on my favorite poets. Sincerely, Elaine
Thomas Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 5:50 PM
Thank you for inboxing me! Don't you dare disappear on me again Timothy Ryerson!
Thomas Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:52 PM
I've never stopped thinking of you Tim. Last I knew you were ill. I pray you're better. (New name old friend).
Horsman Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 10:12 AM
What beautiful poetry, Tim. A master at work, Miss you on soup.
Thomas Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 8:52 PM
I've been waiting so long to hear from you; I even came back here. Please please be okay.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:26 PM
Oh, I am just now seeing your comment to me on this one, from a year ago!! that girl was really taken with you!
Sergi Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 2:53 PM
A beautiful romantic poem that reminded me of my first date Great WRITE!
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:36 PM
A romantic interlude to change any lady's mood! I love this nostalgic peek into your past Tim....beautifully penned! 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2016 at 11:52 PM
OH WOW< Tim. Did this one not win? If it were MY contest, it would WIN!!! WAs this your wife, My friend?
Ryerson Avatar
December 20, 2016 at 6:58 AM
No, not my wife....It was a girl I dated for awhile my senior year in high school. It did place about 7th or 8th in Brian's contest...Thanks for the comment and Merry Christmas my friend!
Onclaud Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 2:43 PM
how your lines twirl with such grace, tim... you always amaze!.. how are you?.. hope all is well, my friend.. huggs
Smith Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Very beautiful and charming Tim
Teagan Avatar
November 29, 2016 at 1:40 PM
Tim this is lovely. I don't know what Brian's contest is, I'll go take a look, .. but.. whatever it is, it has inspired this beautiful nostalgic poem. Hugs
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