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The Cycle

She is beautiful in her awkwardness Armed with a tired smile Foolishly believing in good all the while.... Broken hearts her path has trodden Time foolishly mended what should have not been forgotten 'Whatever does not kill me' her philosophy Or is it just a desperate plea? An excuse to punish her own delicate soul Hoping this sadistic ritual we will never know 'I will fix him someday' That's what we all say.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/6/2009 12:37:00 PM
Very well written, love the last few lines. Great job! Welcome to the Soup! I hope you have a blast with our community...Sabrina
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Date: 8/6/2009 7:21:00 AM
well written and great rhyme, last couple of sentences got to me, maybe it got to a lot of girls and ladies out there...
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Date: 8/5/2009 7:32:00 PM
Nice poems ;)
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Date: 8/5/2009 3:24:00 AM
Good morning Lisa, I had to stop back and welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best with your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 5:18:00 PM
Sad that these cycles continue. Interesting perspective in your poem. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/4/2009 10:55:00 AM
Good afternoon Lisa. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 9:51:00 AM
Very expressive and descriptive writing. Sara
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