The Crumbs

Her wedding vows were simple, heartfelt and concise… “If love is the bread of life,” she said, “I promise all my love with every slice. A smile crossed his face and tears welled in his eyes. He could not hide his happiness… his contentment… his surprise. For he knew in their life together… in their future… whatever comes… He would have been just as happy… living off the crumbs.

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/25/2022 5:39:00 AM

Jim this is beautiful and so deserving of poem of the day… Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/25/2022 4:31:00 AM

Beautiful, Jim! I could not have thought of anything this profound, having been married so young. I was just in awe of the vows coming out of my mouth. We have been married for 42 years now. Congratulations on POTD!

Ken Rone

Date: 8/24/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank you Jim for this marvelous PODT. It sets the stage for so many marriages to come and my hope that the sincete wish of the groom is this sincere ane lasting. Best - Ken

Daisy Meadows

Date: 8/21/2022 10:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/21/2022 6:59:00 PM

They say half a loaf is better than none, but sounds like he got the full one, and is wise enough to know how precious it is, congratulations on this very worthy potd!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/21/2022 6:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD honour - you have composed a beautiful poem on true love. BW ~ Mala

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/21/2022 6:14:00 PM

That is exactly the way love makes you feel. Beautifully composed Jim. Congratulations on having your wonderful poem honored with POTD! Blessings xxoo

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/21/2022 5:04:00 PM

Happy, just "living off the crumbs." My eyes are misty as I'm reading these words. That is unconditional love. The highest form, which is *Agape". This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Jim, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Constance La France

Date: 8/21/2022 3:55:00 PM

Jim, wonderful ink and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~

Peter Onyancha

Date: 8/21/2022 12:02:00 PM

Great structural irony and powerful in character

Eve Roper

Date: 8/21/2022 11:18:00 AM

Beautiful sentiment, Jim, congratulations on POTD

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/21/2022 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A loving tribute to love/marriage. This would make a nice card. Have a blessed day writing away....................

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/21/2022 8:59:00 AM

True love in every sense, Jim. An excellent pick for POTD.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/21/2022 8:53:00 AM

Golly, Jim, hugs and congratulations! Your poem touched my heart so very much.))) Thank you. You reminded me of my husband and I! We were married in City Hall,and we started out with crumbs. We never had much. But we lived off of love and our commitment. My husband died shortly after he turned 40! He is responsible for my creativity and the poetry you see.we were free spirits, loving each other and life, God took him home. Best to your marriage! Panagiota xx

Bill Baker

Date: 8/21/2022 8:28:00 AM

Sweet poem, Jim. Congratulations on your honor of POTD. A loving tribute to marriage vows. Great twist for the last line. Made me smilke my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 8/21/2022 8:18:00 AM

What a wonderful tribute to marriage vows! Congratulations on your POTD! So heartwarming! :)Paulette

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2022 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations for this sweet POTD :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2022 7:18:00 AM

Aw, sweetness, Jim! This couple sounds perfectly suited for each other. They'll have a slice of life together -- not one crummy day! Congrats to you on POTD! Happy Sunday, Gershon