Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

The Crows Looked On

Standing bare the trees looked dead

Around their feet their raiments lay,

Their life force, it seemed they shed

On this bleak autumnal day.


Black as sin, crows looked on

Then screeched in noisy argument,

A raucous call, no sweet birdsong,

A croak the devil surely sent


No-one else was there but me

As I walked upon the crackling leaves,

I wished I had some company

I fancied ghosts walked midst the trees.









Entry for
COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(30) any theme any form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand.
21/10/2020

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Brian Sambourne December 15, 2021 at 10:08 AM Another string of strong images on which to pen your fine poem. You are masterful, Gary. Be well. Brian

Sara Kendrick October 26, 2020 at 1:38 PM I like the flow, rhythm and rhyme in this one and the nature theme. Reads like a good contender. Sara Gary Smith October 26, 2020 at 3:05 PM Thank you Sara. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2020 at 8:38 AM - I did not want to walk alone in this forest, Gary ... a great poem - // Anne-Lise :) Gary Smith October 22, 2020 at 8:52 AM Thank you Anne-Lise. :)

Elaine George October 22, 2020 at 5:13 AM Perfect reflection expressed in tune with the picture. You captured it masterfully. Many congrats on your fine win, Gary. Sincerely, Elaine Gary Smith October 22, 2020 at 6:12 AM Thank you Elaine. :)

Jo Chamberlain October 22, 2020 at 1:03 AM I really enjoyed your poem, congratulations on your placement. :-) Gary Smith October 22, 2020 at 4:04 AM Thank you Joanna. :)