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Dorian Petersen Potter

The Crow

I once heard a knock at my door
And there was a crow repeating "No more"
I was so taken aback
I hit him with a rack
And sent him crashing right on the floor!







September,3,2014

Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2014

animalbirdfunnyhumorhumorouslimerick

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Andrea Dietrich

September 11, 2014 at 10:47 PM

Now THIS is great rhyming!! A cute limerick.

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 13, 2014 at 10:03 AM

Thank you Andrea for stopping by and comment! xxx D.

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 12, 2014 at 8:41 AM

Thank you Andrea so much for stopping by. You're very kind my poet friend. See ya around! Lol... The best to you! xxxx D.

September 11, 2014 at 9:02 PM

really smiling beautifully penned piece

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 11, 2014 at 10:23 PM

Thank you Liam! Nice to know it made you smile. Best wishes! xxxx D.

September 11, 2014 at 3:37 PM

Great play on Edgar Allen Poe's work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 11, 2014 at 8:08 PM

Thank you so much Sara! I love Poe! Nice to know you enjoyed my silly and humorous Limerick. Hugs and God bless you! xxxx D

September 11, 2014 at 12:34 PM

I really enjoyed this poem! It's simple and short but the words flow so smoothly. It was quite humorous to!

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 11, 2014 at 8:05 PM

Thank you Ben! Glad to know you liked it. Lol. . Best to you my friend! xxxx D.

September 10, 2014 at 8:53 PM

Funny stuff - sort of a comic re - write of E.A.Poe Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 11, 2014 at 8:03 PM

Thank you Matthew! I really appreciate you stopping by and reading this one. Best wishes my friend! Xxxx D.

September 10, 2014 at 9:28 AM

Well crafted write with nice humor, Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 10, 2014 at 4:22 PM

Thank you so much! Xxx D.

September 10, 2014 at 8:47 AM

Lol....love it... Thanks for the morning smile.... Hugs Tim

Dorian Petersen Potter

September 10, 2014 at 4:24 PM

Thank you so much Tim! Hugs to you too my poet friend. Xxxx D.

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