The Crosses In Your Eyes

You never really knew the beauty of your soul.
Of how it is possible to be both old and young
within the same body that tells about the years past,
but can put to shame so many of today’s indolent youth.

How were you able to retain such innocence,
for only a child can categorically say such abhorrence
of one type of food even with the knowledge that it is good?
Yet words of deep understanding pour forth from the same mouth.

When the gift to listen was showered upon the earth
you must have paid attention, for you have it in abundance
“To hear is normal, to listen, a gift, to understand...a miracle”*
One who would care to keep these words would understand. You do.

You are sensitive. Who would have thought it so?
You have that amazing capacity to command words to your bidding
and just the right touch of irreverence to twist them when it suits you.
Still and all, you feel the wound deeply and I’d hate to be the cause of it.

I tried to look into your heart through your words.
Words which were already read by many before I entered the scene
yet they did not see the sadness, the dark that lurked in the corner of your light -
They were too mesmerized by the laughter, to see the crosses in your eyes.






*John W. Wulf, author of the book The Lady Who Loves the Whisper  
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1. The Poetry Soup Poem of the Week - 02 August to 08 August, 2015
2. The Crosses In Your Eyes Contest - 3rd Place , 29 July 2015
    Sponsor: Justin Bordner - 
  
Kim Patrice Nunez
27 July 2015
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August 26, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Beautiful
Nunez Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:39 AM
Thank you so much TPS, for this honor. I enjoyed the whole week. More power in all your undertakings. Kim
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August 7, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Hi Kim, congratulations on your Poem of the Week! Well-deserved, my friend! Pandita
Marty Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 1:34 AM
atta girl... best wishes on your POTW distinction, kim!
La France Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 9:03 AM
Kim congratulations on poem of the week, enjoy the honor
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 11:37 AM
Well written and lovely. POW
Nance Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Grats on having this poem of the week :) well done!!
Romaine Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 8:42 AM
Hey Kim, BIG congratulations on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTW! Be Blessed, Neva
Scott Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Nice write. Congratulations on poem of the week!!!
Konos Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Congratulations Kim on Poem of the Week
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 7:38 PM
Great choice for POW...congrats
Lopez Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 6:44 PM
Absolutely beautiful, touching story. Interesting all the way through. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
Bateman Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations Kim on POTW!! Well-Done!! Best Always, Gary
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August 2, 2015 at 3:21 PM
Congrats on poem of the week... SKAT
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 1:58 PM
- Congratulations with your P.O.T.W, dear Kim - Happy new week - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 1:15 PM
you go girl.. congrats on your POTW award!.. huggs
Williams Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Gee Kim, you just get better and better with your writes. You have opened up your heart with this write and the previous one I just read. Something has just broken out of you, completely in touch with your feelings and emotions and able to put them into such meaningful verse. Keep up the great writes Kim.......John
Allison Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 7:37 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you on poem of the week Kim - congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Atfield Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 12:37 PM
still sending out gems, like “ The Crosses In Your Eyes, ”. A great tribute, and full of analytical insight .B. J. “A ” 2 ( Bill . )
Manassian Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on your awesome win in Justin's contest. This is a lovely tribute. I don't know John. I've only visited one poem, but....he must be a special poet to have received this tribute, Kim. Poetry is a beautiful thing and those who write....beautiful people.
Zerbst Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 7:07 PM
Fantastic ending here. It really finishes the poem with a final flare. Many congrats.
Macfarlane Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Kim.....a exquisite write and tribute! I read John's insert on his book and I definitely want to read it! : ) Hugs
Onclaud Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 1:44 PM
a sure winner, kim.. huge congrats!.. huggs
Muideen Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 11:43 AM
Congratulation on your placement in the contest..........A.M.
La France Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 10:39 AM
Kim, a beautiful tribute to John and congratulations on your placement in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, the war dead
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