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The Crones

Massive, ancient, maple crones rise from the loam. Bereft of garments, their bark a tatter, naked roots and limbs pocked by woodpeckers. Remnants of their crowning glory, long gone; lay supine in the jewel weeds. Moss adheres to the maples northern face like chin whiskers……. and shelves of mushrooms skirt their trunks. Aged, yet strong….. still, like Atlas; they shoulder the sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/11/2009 9:13:00 PM
Strong and vivid images, Debbie! I can see these aging trees watching over the land, the sky upon their weathered shoulders! Another example of your wonderful talents! Love you! Robin
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Date: 10/4/2009 4:09:00 PM
That is a load for the Maple to shoulder now isn't it. Like the way that you approach the subject here. Keep writing. Sara
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