The Crones

Massive, ancient, maple crones 
rise from the loam.
Bereft of garments, their bark a tatter,
naked roots and limbs 
pocked by woodpeckers.
Remnants of their crowning glory, long gone;
lay supine in the jewel weeds.
Moss adheres to the maples northern face
like chin whiskers…….
and shelves of mushrooms skirt their trunks.
Aged, yet strong…..
still, like Atlas;
they shoulder the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Gass Avatar
October 11, 2009 at 9:13 PM
Strong and vivid images, Debbie! I can see these aging trees watching over the land, the sky upon their weathered shoulders! Another example of your wonderful talents! Love you! Robin
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October 4, 2009 at 4:09 PM
That is a load for the Maple to shoulder now isn't it. Like the way that you approach the subject here. Keep writing. Sara
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