The Crisping Days of Autumn

Petals are withering on late blooming roses 
My Summer garden is beginning to fade
Maples are shedding their last clinging leaves
Amber fields are ready for Fall's gathering

There's a faint chill wafting in the air.
I call it the crisping days of Autumn
and the first hint of a seasonal change
My pastoral view is worthy of a painting
Tomorrow, I'll sketch the visions before me
layers of bold colors as I walk down the lane.

I hear the wind traveling through bare limbs
It seems to be whistling a lively gypsy tune
A song that brings out the wanderer in me
making me quite envious of geese on wing,
honking as they quickly travel south bound.

A stag proudly stands atop the hill
reigning like a king in antlered crown
His warm breath exhaled in a clouded mist
Happy he's caught the attention of a doe.

Autumn has always awakened the artist in me
with its bold palette of crimson, umber and gold
Ruffled russet gowns, once adorning tree limbs
lay wrinkled and scattered across the forest floor

Brushes and canvas await my hand.
It's decor is a kaleidoscope of colors
From sketches I'll paint Autumnal scenes
It's a gift Nature generously offers to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Congrats Jenna on a fine write, I remember this one and it's still a great read, congrats on a nice win!
Logan Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Thank you for placing my verses on your winning list, John.
Watt Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Jenna, I'm sorry I missed this when you first posted it. So glad I was able to read it today. Have you been painting much this year? You do have the artist's eye when you paint with words that adds such detail to your writing; from the rose's fading petals to the maple's clinging leaves, to the breath of a stag on a cold morning. The gift Autumn bestows upon you has become a gift you bestow upon your readers. I mean that sincerely. Beautifully composed.
Logan Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 8:24 AM
I've been neglecting my painting, John. It's not something I can do unless I'm in the mood. I've touched up a scene of a sailboat on the sea. It's on wood, but little else. You didn't miss this one...for here you are.
La France Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:32 AM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge _Constance
Logan Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Thank you for the placing, Constance.
Ashley Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 9:07 AM
Dear Jenna, it is a pleasure to return and offer my congratulations to you for your wonderful win in Constance's contest with your stunning and soulful poem. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Logan Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:25 AM
Hi Sweet Susan. Thank you very much for your ever present encouragment. From an N/A to a 3rd place is a step up. lol
Koplin Avatar
October 24, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Very beautiful Jenna! Amazing imagery, I can already see your painting!
Logan Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 3:04 AM
How very kind are your comments, Mark.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 10:04 PM
Such a gorgeous work you've created, captured and colored with your dancing brush of loving bristles, tingling with insight and enlightenment. This poem is a light in the night, filled with insight into the hopes of the reader's yearning. I love it and it is a fave. God bless you dear friend
Logan Avatar
October 23, 2020 at 5:01 AM
What a bounty of wonderful compliments you've given my write, Regina. Thank you so much for each one, as well as for choosing it as a favorite.
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 7:15 PM
Another brilliant write Jenna, inspired by a wondrous vista that you described so elegantly!
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 8:14 PM
Thank you for such cordial remarks, John. I respect your thoughts.
Rose  Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 3:40 PM
You have created a masterpiece for the eyes dear poet. Winning wishes are being sent for a successful placement, Stay healthy and keep writing, it will keep you peaceful and calm.
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 8:12 PM
Thank you so many considerate thoughts, Pixie. They're all valued.
Cunningham Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 2:48 PM
I enjoyed your autumnal walk Jenna. Stunning imagery throughout. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 8:10 PM
I'm so pleased by your comments, Tom. Thank you so much.
Ashley Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 1:46 PM
The crisping days.. Yes! Your elegant artistic pen spills exquisite ink, Jenna. Striking imagery and tender emotions brush the imagination and heart with an Autumn portrait to be admired. This piece is both inspired by the depth and breadth of venerated Nature and your lush creative intellect, and it is so inspiring to your grateful reader’s soulful senses and sensibility. I adore this, dear poet. A fav!! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 8:10 PM
Susan, your detailed comments are poetically inspiring to me, and are always encouraging. Thank you very much for your kind words. I find them so gratifying.
Allison Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 12:44 PM
what glorious imagery Jenna, i adore the thought of the crisping days of Autumn, that is such a delightful phrase:-) hugs jan xx
Logan Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 12:53 PM
Thanks so very much for the great comment, Jan. That phrase just came to me when I thought of ripening apples!
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