The Crippled Pigeon

The crippled pigeon
Who had the gift of love
Adopted three orphaned
Bunnies; sheltering
Them under her tiny wings
Love was in the air 
With this tiny little dove

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/27/2010 9:07:00 PM
Love has no boundaries indeed--congrats on your win with this piece, Sara :) I could just picture that sweet pigeon and those bunnies in my head! :)
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in John Heck’s “Love is in the Air” contest with this absolutely wonderful poem. Love like that crosses all barriers. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your poetic light is bright. Lovingly, Dane Ann.
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:06:00 AM
Sara, Thank you for this poem. Direct to my favorites. Congratulations on your well deserved win and thank you so much for your kind word and support. Love, Will
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Date: 1/17/2010 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Sara. I can see he had a hard time picking the winners. Some fabulous poetry was entered. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2010 5:31:00 PM
How sweet, Sara. Congratulations with this!
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Date: 1/16/2010 3:51:00 PM
never saw this one,Sara. Nice work.. You ..and the dove! Congrats
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Date: 1/16/2010 9:11:00 AM
Sara, many congratulations on your win in John's fine contest >> James
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Date: 1/16/2010 1:31:00 AM
Heart-wrenchingly beautiful, dear Sara. Congratulations on your win in John's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:57:00 AM
that was a cute story, I like the dog who had to get a nap, every day.
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Date: 10/4/2009 3:04:00 PM
Hi Sara very touching. Good message too. Keep writing hun. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 10/4/2009 2:50:00 PM
Aw, lovely poem Sara - Dove's are gorgeous >> James
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Date: 10/4/2009 2:48:00 PM
In Greet the Sun..the boil is lassitude ;)..maybe I need to work on it more..Italian sonnets ain't easy LOL..as to the verse above..very nice imagery I suggest present tense...."Adopts three orphans Bunnies and shelters Them under her tiny wings This dove had a mother's love. Light & Love
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:58:00 PM
very moving poem! Sara!... jim
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