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The Creek

I long to hear the wandering rill; its gentle song as it wanders past land. Finding strength--so soon lost to a hill. Meanders only creeks understand. Deep in dreams, its music beckons still. Beside the creek, bloomed tangled meadow grass was so high it reached to our knees. A perfect place for children to grow-- midst four o'clocks and lost apple trees, and the creek's soft, iridescent glow. Like the creek, reaching end of its run, we each chased youthful, long-ago dreams. Childhood disappeared in morning sun. So lost in shadows now that it seems but a daydream just recently spun. October 25, 2022

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Date: 10/31/2022 4:53:00 PM
Doesn’t it though…must seem like a daydream. If we could pop in for a moment…
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Date: 10/30/2022 2:06:00 PM
Ahh!! Childhood memories can be so grand sometimes. I believe this was one of those times. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/30/2022 4:23:00 AM
This is simply beautiful I enjoyed reading your work.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/30/2022 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Yolanda! Your comments warmed my heart.
Date: 10/29/2022 9:32:00 PM
A magic meadow by the creek where childhood memories still flow in dreams, Wonderful write Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/28/2022 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph!
Date: 10/26/2022 8:32:00 PM
Enchanting allegory of childhood here, Ann! Lovely, lovely penned. Magic and Mystery, Gershon
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/28/2022 10:45:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon! I love your comments.
Date: 10/26/2022 1:21:00 PM
I love the nostalgic feel of this one, Ann.
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/29/2022 10:38:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I must get off this nostalgia trip!
Date: 10/26/2022 2:03:00 AM
Thats really lovely Ann! I love nostalgic poems. Debx
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/26/2022 8:43:00 AM
Thanks, Deb. I like them, maybe too much.
Date: 10/25/2022 11:20:00 AM
So many of us are up the creek these days . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!"
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Ann Peck
Date: 10/25/2022 12:06:00 PM
HaHa! No kidding! Thanks for commenting, Rico. Aloha.

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