The Creek

I long to hear the wandering creek
its gentle song as it bubbled past land.
in its whispers, we could hear it speak
words only children can understand
gentle music we now often seek.

Beside the creek, a magic meadow 
grass was so high it reached to our knees.
We ran and laughed hiding from shadows
midst four o'clocks and lost apple trees,
and the creek's soft, iridescent glow.

Like the creek, reaching end of its run,
Childhood vanished overnight, it seems
Could it be but a fairytale spun
when we ran happily chasing dreams
So long ago, when daydreams were young

October 25, 2022
Edited October 17, 2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2022 at 4:53 PM
Doesn’t it though…must seem like a daydream. If we could pop in for a moment…
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Ahh!! Childhood memories can be so grand sometimes. I believe this was one of those times. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Nicholsen Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 4:23 AM
This is simply beautiful I enjoyed reading your work.
Peck Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so much, Yolanda! Your comments warmed my heart.
May Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 9:32 PM
A magic meadow by the creek where childhood memories still flow in dreams, Wonderful write Ann
Peck Avatar
November 28, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph!
Wolf Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Enchanting allegory of childhood here, Ann! Lovely, lovely penned. Magic and Mystery, Gershon
Peck Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Thanks, Gershon! I love your comments.
Dietrich Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 1:21 PM
I love the nostalgic feel of this one, Ann.
Peck Avatar
October 29, 2022 at 10:38 AM
Thanks, Andrea. I must get off this nostalgia trip!
M  Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 2:03 AM
Thats really lovely Ann! I love nostalgic poems. Debx
Peck Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Thanks, Deb. I like them, maybe too much.
Leffanta Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 11:20 AM
So many of us are up the creek these days . . .Enjoyed! Aloha!"
Peck Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 12:06 PM
HaHa! No kidding! Thanks for commenting, Rico. Aloha.
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