The Creation of Andrew

Inside the Sistine dome
of her mind
the superstar with the white shirt
open to the navel,
floating on a cloud
of ecstatic music,
are reaching out a hand
to a boy called Andrew,
clothed in nothing;
his initiative draped lazily
over his thigh.

Her hair flowing just right,
matching the colour code
of her attire,
she holds out a hand to him,
allowing a curve to show half hidden
for later exploration.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Venter Avatar
November 27, 2008 at 1:17 AM
Thanks for the comment, Derrick. Women stimulate my imagination in all guises!
Burton Avatar
November 26, 2008 at 11:50 PM
a fully covered women stirs the amagination of men, great write.
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